You should put quotations marks around the words that characters say. By the way great fanfiction.

I like it,I think it's very original could plese continue the story and if you don't I will be forced to sheshkabob it would be a sad loss.

Myre: Do you have to threaten authors like that?

Yes I do. Ja Nee

i love the fic. please make some more!i would very much like to read them-!bye now!

Here we go again! Another new human sent to protect the DigiDestineds. I'M the only one who can protect Takeru. Other then that, a good fic!

So very much a Mary Sue.

Takuya and Matsuda-chan: A really great fic!

very nice, is there a seqeul? i hope so

Good. But a bit confusing. In the movie Joe, Sora, Mimi, Matt, and Izzy weren't up close with greymon and parrotmon, they were on their proches outside their rooms. For more details see the 1st digimon movie and Wargreymon V.S. Metalgurumon(the one where agumon and gabumon fight between one another).

I know it's a little late for this, but... CONTINUE! *blushes* ;; Uh... yeah... SURE you will, a year and two months after you started... *grumbles under her breath, "Why couldn't I have found this thing sooner? It's GOOD..."*

You know what? You should continue this if you ever get the insperation for it. It's really good. But maybe you should finish Gem Warriors first... Also, yues, I know that I reviewed before. So sue me. :P... Well, actually, no, don't sue me... I only get minimum wage... Trust me, I've got nothing to give...

I loved it! Just imagining Izzy as a kawaii little kid... ok enough of that. Anyway I thought it was very creative. It reminded me of a story I've been attempting to work on for the longest time. I eagerly await the second part! I also want to be in Patamon 410's fic. My e-mail's . Thankies!

Pretty cool fic Kyra, I can't wait to read the rest.

Really cool! By the way, do you think I can use the name 'Phoenixia' in my fics? And I'de like to be in Patamon 410's fic! Just make sure he/she doesn't torture me to badly! (I have enough of my friend doing that)

That was interesting, but did you mean to spell "elemental"? I got a little confused at some parts. But, hey, who am I to talk, eh?

Whoa! COol!