 Evil Shall Giggle 2007-10-21 . chapter 1I liked this. It was really nice to get an insight into T'Pol's emotions, one that was probably quite accurate. Their interactions with each other (Trip and T'Pol, I mean) as their feelings develop are interesting and fun to see. Thanks! |
 Debbie5 2006-03-14 . chapter 1What a wonderful story. Well laid out and it continues what you've established in the previous story and sets things up in the next story. Well done. I hope you keep the storyline going. |
 Anna 2004-03-26 . chapter 1 This was light and incredibly beautiful. I actually started crying a bit during the middle. Your writing is excellent. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your next story. |
 A. Windsor 2004-02-05 . chapter 1:) this was so beautifully awesome!
A. Windsor |
 lordanhur 2003-09-01 . chapter 1great work only read dif on mighter then sword page (whitch is dead it looks like) |
 bigfootscoob 2003-05-19 . chapter 1 I loved the story, simple yet touching. Hope you come up with more.
More power. |
 Joe 2003-04-24 . chapter 1 This story is wonderful. In Russia we have information about Trek, but not so much about ENTERPRISE. I have seen only some of the first season. Still, the way you draw thees two persons coinsides with what I want to happen to tnem.
The only problem is that all T/T'P or A/T'P stories show Vulcun feelings as if they are Human.
They are not! I doubt if T'Pol could learn how to love? or just feel deep emotions in such a short time. I wish she did. But there could be no future for them, because it is stated that Sarek and Amanda were the first V/H couple. |
 zealousgirl 2003-04-23 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story - and you really don't need to read your other stories to understand and appreciate it. (although I don't know why others would want to NOT read your stories - they are all fabulous)
Looking forward to 'Objects in Motion'. |
 PadawanMage 2003-04-22 . chapter 1Ouch! You could practically cut the tension between them with a Nerf Bat! It's cool to read more 'back-story' on these two crazy kids leading up to Differential. Please keep it up! |
 nikitee 2003-04-22 . chapter 1 Superb, Zane! What a glimpse into T'Pol's thoughts -- from such a seemingly innocuous event! A conference and shuttle ride! Visions of going to numerous tech conferences, book & laptop in hand, filled my mind as I read this -- the other-world-ness of the experience, with so much reflective time available in the physical idleness; nothing to do but THINK! This interlude cements change for two lives, and two peoples, beautifully...
Thanks again! |
 plumtuckered 2003-04-21 . chapter 1 Wow! This was simply amazing! I love Trip and T'Pol together and you capture them so beautifully! Your words are simply magic! Thank you! |
 airaloki 2003-04-21 . chapter 1aw, that was sweet. I loved it! it really fit in with the rest of the series. I can't wait for the next story. :D |
 Alison M. DOBELL 2003-04-21 . chapter 1 I so adored this story! Wow, love T'Pol's feelings growing for Trip and his realisation that she might love him. So beautifully written, so powerful and tender. A lovely companion piece to your other stories which I have devoured with the greatest of relish and ease. Long may your writing enthrall us, thank you - Ali D :~) |
 kittytrypsin 2003-04-21 . chapter 1 Oh, that was absolutely wonderful. I love all of your stories and you write all of the characters so well. Please write more, soon. Thank you. |