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| LiYinBlake 2008-09-30 ch 5,  | abuse“Sorry I’m late gays. Luna didn’t wake me in time.” ? |
| sin.nighthawk 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abuseare u going to do the sequel to this or not ? |
| mikebreslau 2007-12-10 ch 7, | abuseOkay, good story, and enjoyable. However, I was caught short when Ranma goes shopping for spices while still in costume. That strains credibility. Usagi might do that, but Ranma is too sharp, too aware to make sch a mistake... Mike |
| Lesychan 2007-10-06 ch 21, | abuseNice Fic...Fun Read... |
| Asgeras 2007-07-31 ch 21, | abuseDang, I wish you would have continued this. I was really looking forward to the NWC's reactions to Ranma's fiascoes. There was a lot left open, such as Akane's in depth reaction to Ranma being Sailor Sapphire, as well as the meaning to Ranma being able to reach into Pluto's subspace pocket (maybe Ranma is the reincarnation of Sapphire Knight, Pluto's long lost lover :P). It was an all around good fic. Thanks for sharing it. |
| Krimzonrayne 2007-04-30 ch 21, | abuseVery, very entertaining. |
| tatewaki2000 2007-04-12 ch 21, | abuseThis has been a favorite for a long time, great job. |
| Blackdex 2006-07-30 ch 21, | abuseUh, Okay, nice piece. Ciao |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2005-12-25 ch 21, | abuseGreat work. Funny, avoids the major crossover cliches, and highly enjoyable. |
| Shavaineth 2005-09-06 ch 21, | abuseThis story was quite entertaining, but then I'm becoming a fan of the whole Ranma/Sailor Moon cross over. I really liked that Ranma was just pretending to be a Senshi and that he was actually weaker than the true Senshi when they were powered up. It was a nice twist to the whole story. I would have dearly loved to see more P-chan the senshi side kick and I was a bit disapointed that the promised article about Ryouga helping the senshi did not appear. Also the last few chapters feel a bit rushed, as if you got tired of writing the story and just wanted to end it. It gives the whole story kind of an anti-climactic feel and leaves quite a few unresolved issues. In particular the ones with Ryogua and the whole issue with Ranma's mother thinking he has a boyfriend. Plus all the bits with Akane, that while quite cute and sweet, ulitmately felt unimportant to the rest of the story. I did like the bit at the end about her recognizing Ranma's handwriting though. Overall, the story could use a bit of a spelling/grammer check, but was quite entertaining and I hope you will be doing that promised sequal to wrap up loose ends. |
| Bobboky 2005-05-02 ch 21, | abusegood story |
| Materia-Blade 2004-04-30 ch 21, | abuseAHAHAHAHHA I can't believe I didn't find out this was ended! Well It was a great fic. Unfortunantly, I am holding my breath for a sequel. (I won't hold it forever but if you come out with one I'll try to find it.) It was a great fic! I hope to see more fics in the future that live up this one, from you. Lata! P.S. (GREAT FIC!) |
| Miro-Uneidebi 2004-03-13 ch 10, anon. | abusewow, Ranma and Ryouga meeting, and not trying to kill each other, just how its suppose to be (in a way, not saying they wouldent fight later on, that would just be not right... just saying that they wouldent fight all the time... yeah...) |
| Kawaii-e 2004-02-22 ch 21, | abuse*clap* *clap* *clap* That was a good fic. Enjoyed the read. And it got good grammar and spelling. Read ya in the next fic, I hope. |
| GriffonSpade 2004-02-07 ch 21, anon. | abuseGreat story, very nice. Oh, and in the sequel you could possibly make some of the guest appearances with Akane be a small part of the main story, even if not a large part...No matter what way you go with it, I'll be looking forward to the sequel! |