 Handmaiden Dorme 1/27/06 . chapter 2YAY! Update soon! |
 Chriss Corkscrew 1/2/05 . chapter 1Hee hee! Naughty. |
 Bladefanatic 10/21/03 . chapter 1so funny that Malcolm fainted! Trust the security guy to not be able to handle seeing a naked woman! Bwahwhahhwhah...
Yes you should do more!
More More More always more...I want more about your story Ice as well! ::evil grin, I know I had to put in another request for that one!)
Blade |
 Thruma 9/28/03 . chapter 2Hey *shouts angrily* I want more. ;-) This story started so well and please continue it! My eyes were growing wide when Hoshi took her shirt off. I never expected it from her but then it was all a dream ... *g* |
 ChristalSteele 8/18/03 . chapter 2i like the story so far. can't wait for more. |
 hjg 4/26/03 . chapter 2 kewl. write more. |
 jani 4/23/03 . chapter 2 Burst out laughing at chapter 1, then wished I was Hoshi in chapter 2!Roll on 3. |
 Alison 4/23/03 . chapter 2 Seemed so short but it was a good twist! Does Hoshi have stuffed, cuddly animals for Malcolm to sleep w/? I think that would be cute! Him waking-up amongst a bunch of critters, and he could mistake Porthos for one of them! Ha! Port. could just be being babysat by Hoshi, since the Captn. could be on a week-long conference, being the guests of some new aliens they made friends w/. I'll leave that part-the alien naming/catagorizing to you...so there you go...bye! |
 Aeryn Alexander 4/22/03 . chapter 2No! It was all a dream! Well, we know all about Malcolm's dreams ... so, yeah, that works. It's cute that Hoshi knocked him unconscious. Great chapter! |
 Alison 4/22/03 . chapter 1 Good job! I've had that feeling too of not wanting to let go of a guy's tee...good Hoshi being all wiley w/Mr.Reed...can't think of what to reccomend to you to do next, something involving Porthos stealing more of Mal's clothes for Hoshi's collection, I spose'...take care, bye! |
 Aeryn Alexander 4/21/03 . chapter 1That was so hilarious! I loved the ending (which I'm actually hoping wasn't really the end of the story ...). And Hoshi telling Malcolm that she sleeps in his shirt. *giggle, giggle* That was great! |