Hello Andaliri, I have just finished reading you're amazing fanfiction. Well...I don't really know if you are going to write another chapter since your last updating is "begining" to date. ( O.o 05-28-04!!)
Were you to busy? Tired of it?
It's relly sad, but I understand (I've wrote fanfiction myself some long time ago ).
But- Ugh! Well it's so frustrating! ^^,
I was totaly into this story, really: found of!

I've just read it today. It was getting more and more interresting and then...nothing. I can imagine the end of it, yes, but then again...I am sure you know this feeling don't you? As a writer, and as a reader.
Well, what can I say to make a end at this "review"? I think I said enough things (Wich could be, furthermore badly interpreted: Don't get angry ^^, I can be clumsy with english language: I am french and it take me a lot to write this (thanks to my dictionnary!).I don't try to make you writting again a story that you are fed up with, I just want to say "thank you" including, I must admit a little bit of regret in my words. Soory for that, I really don't want to be anoying ^^)
If one day you see my little speech, you could try to read some suikoden anfiction again, maybe it will give you a little nostalgic feeling, and maybe, maybe, you'll try to finish it again.
I can't promise that I will be there again, looking for some awesome fanfiction like I do now, but you can be sure that your story is in my dreamy head for a long long time. For now I'll keep a look on it, excuse-me if this review was too naive or to simple, after all I can undertand english (and read it!^^) but speak is something else (I just want to add, that it was strange tout read an english text wich I am not really used to, and see some french words in it! *laugh* really it was just funny thing. ^^)

Well...Sorry If I've made language mistakes.

"Encore Bravo, et merci pour tout!"

With total admiration. Louise.

i'm playing suikoden 3 again and wanted to read fanfic about it! this story is great. it really is. please finish it for the sake of finishing a good story and don't stop because the craze is over.

i know the last update of this story was well over a year ago but maybe you might finish it?

please finish it! yours sincerely!

You have to go on with this story. It has one of the most intriguing plot twists that I've read in a long time, and I'm desperate to see what happens next.
Sry this review is so late, I just found this.

Are you going to update this at all? I'm really curious what's going to happen to Borus... The chapter with Kidd was pretty entertaining, though.

This is really good. I'm dying to see what happens next.

happy parts??^^ yay!

it's been a year and still no update?...no! it's such a good story too!

w! gotta read more later^^

*sobs* i want my borus baby back!

you better update!

great chapter

O_O *stares off in space sparkley eyed for ten minutes* YOU UPDATED! *hands author a sparkle star sticker* Thank you so much! It was an excellent chapter, especially since it basically summed up everything that had happened previously for those who hadn't read it yet. Thank you so much!

It's been a really long time since you updated this. NEwho... I like this chapter. The addition of Kidd is a nice touch to tie up loose ends so far. Keep going!
Love always,
Lily

This is excellent! I really like the part about the Council (extremely keen insight about politics, XD), and it's a little intriguing to find out that there was more to Borus' kicking out than we expected.

So don't leave us hanging!

What surprise to come here and find that this was updated~! I'm glad it's finally moving along; what a day brightener!

xD Very comical interactions between Kidd and the three girls. I pity the boy now; I want to give him gallons of milk, heheheh. Ciryl is quite a likable original character, though I don't know if she'll be popping up again. She seems clever and able to think for herself.

Yes! Another chapter at last! And a very interesting one at that. The idea of the Council taking money from the Redrums is quite ingenious, if I do say so myself. Good job. I hope you continue to update!

aw borus's gone and that Ciryl girl is a original-character *gasp* yabeternotmakeramarizu oki? *read it fast^_~*

anyway this is just too good and i want you *point at author* to continue
if you do, i'll give you a cookie!*show yummi looking cookie*hehehehehe