"That scene in my office was abominably messy; it belonged in an old Western film and not in real life.”

I can HEAR him saying that.

I do belive you should continue with this venture. As I read it, I could picture the dialogue truly taking place in a Hannabal movie. Lector seems slightly out of character, though. Although, I haven't watched much of Red Dragon, just snipits that my dad watches on the television every once in a while.

I'm sorry that I can't poke holes in your plot, grammar, or spelling that would help you with your writing. Your use of fragmented sentences is imaginative and very... I think colloquial would be the correct term. Perhaps not. Your lack of use of Lector's given name was very nice. It gave Will a sense of seperation.

I do hope you elongate this story in the near future. :D
~Catherine

ah..let me think...omg that was amazing, tottally in character and so needs to be continued.

I have always enjoyed this story and have always been disappointed that you never finished it. If you do not intend to finish it could you give others permission to continue it maybe? But anyway great work!

dude! it's so worth continuing. there are just so few stories with will in them and yours has caught my intrest. please continue if it's not too much to ask.

It's a shame, a real shame that you didn't write more to this. It's so incredibly hard to find Red Dragon fanfic, and even harder to find one this interesting, well written and NON-SLASH. I just watched this movie again last night after 2 years ... I was kind of on a Ed Norton kick, and was watching all his movies I owned. I know it's been 3 years since you updated this fic and probably have no intention whatsoever of finishing it. But, could you drop me a note just to say that, just so I won't have to go through the bother of adding this to my alerts?

I like this very much. Do continue. It would be rude not to . . .

Its worth continuing! Please continue this! Let the mind games begin!

Do I think it's worth continuing? Absolutely! This has the makings of an excellent 4+ chapter story. The characters are well written, the tension is wonderfully thick, and it's very well written. I strongly encourage you to continue. Thanks,

jenben

You should continue!

Maybe add it a bit of slash and stuff.

I like it. :D Keep it up, though I don't have any good ideas. Sorreh.

There's potential of continueation I suppose. I'd sure like to see other characters too Clarice, Jack, Barney, maybe Mason. Email me if you would like questions for ideas...i'm always open...especially about Hannibal Lecter.

I think this must have been based on the new movie and not the original version. It's a bit out of sequence as Red Dragon and it's original version Man Hunter actually happen before Silence of the Lambs and that's when the dorctor escapes. But all of the technicals aside this was a great fic. I haven't seen the new version but the chars seemed very cossitant. I very much like the jumps in Will's mental process. It's a nice mix of being very good at what he does, knowing Lector very well, and suddenly realising some things.

Of course continue this! Its good! Not to mention there isn't much Will Graham stories out there regarding after Lector's escape. Please update!

whoa.
this is awesome stuff you've got here-I'm impressed! I agree-after Lector escaped, he would have gone looking for Will, wouldn't he? You gave me the same tense-feeling that I get from the films. Gotta love it. Plus, captured Will and Lector very well.

CONTINUE IT NOW! I don't thing Hannibal would kill Graham, but a taste of fear is fun. Maybe he would let him go, but give him a new scar. You can live with only one arm, leg, kidney, or lung, you know. . .