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Reviews for: Beneath A Butterfly
MistyEyes 5/6/03 . chapter 1
This wasn't THAT graphic. But still good. Nice little ficcie ya got here.
FireKat 5/1/03 . chapter 1
aw that was so sweet! fluffy,fluffy,wuffy! o.0 ok sorry about that.. i just LOVE fluff! so no getting sad and not writing stories! that would be bad!

speaking of- i dedicated my new fic "Weiss goes to the Fair" to you because you threatend me with a writers prod 0.o scary

ja ne _

ps- i agree about the whole waiting until you are married- i know i am
The Delightful Miss N 4/28/03 . chapter 1
Loved It! I especially liked Ran's memories of Aya-chan. That was so sweet! Keep on the good work! mwah ;*
Seph Lorraine 4/27/03 . chapter 1
Oh my friggin' Gods... That was, no doubt, one of the most beautiful one-shot RanKen pieces I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was indeed, very beautiful.

You have a lovely way with words, they all seem to mold your story so well. It's beautiful. I also love your characterisation of Ran and Ken- so sweet.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I hope to read more pieces by you soon. :)
Krysana 4/23/03 . chapter 1
cute cute cute! such a cute couple!

love the warnings too!
Raven 4/23/03 . chapter 1
I loved that story... so cute... -
StardustZero 4/23/03 . chapter 1
that was so kawaii! love it. the butterfly was a nice touch too!
CherubKatan 4/23/03 . chapter 1
aw that was a good story windy though I can't call you big brother... P i'm older than you i think *blinks* anyway good story and pretty flutterbys!
kami-chan 4/22/03 . chapter 1
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kami-chan1 4/22/03 . chapter 1
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LittleIsa 4/22/03 . chapter 1
That was so sweet and romantic! *happy sighs* You did such a good job! *glomps* I expect more of these from you now! *giggles* Oh, I dont know if you were reading my Ken/Schu fic, but I updated it! *giggles and hugs you* Luv Mama-chan
Nearly Indi-cent 4/22/03 . chapter 1
Yay for pointless lemons!

I loved how you describe stuff.

'Ran, pale and flawless, pressed against the sheets white enough to resemble snow. Sunlight beat down on him, though indirectly, framing his perfection with a halo.' was my favorite bit... I loved it so much! God it made me wanna squeal! Please write more!

KnY
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