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iron-eyes24
2005-08-03
ch 9,
abuseupdate NOW
cysne
2004-04-04
ch 9, anon.
abuseHEY!!
Have you quit writing this fic or what??
Pleeaasee update soon, mellon? *puppy-dog eyes*
*AHEM!!*
new_line_nazgul
2004-02-12
ch 9, anon.
abuseHURRY UP AND UPDATE
NOW
new-line-nazgul
2004-02-05
ch 9, anon.
abusee-mail me AND UPDATE CHAPTER NINE NOW!
new-line-nazgul
2004-01-22
ch 8, anon.
abuseUPDATE CHAPTER NINE YOU DAMNED FOOL (no affense)NOW
new_line_nazgul
2004-01-17
ch 9, anon.
abusehurry up and update chapter 9 you fool
new_line_nazgul
2004-01-16
ch 6, anon.
abuseit is briliant I've read the first story and not once did you but Boromir I praise you for that.
BlackCaleb
2003-12-30
ch 9,
abuseOMG! IT IS SO GOOD!
TheVampyrSlayer
2003-12-27
ch 8,
abuseI ALREADY READ CHAPPY 9 BUT I FORGOT TO PUT SOME THING IN MY REVIEW AND UM YA...
I LOVE HOW U HAVE HIGH ACTION AND SOME HUMOR IN THERE AND I JUST LOVE IT!
i also love that u have legolas is like the "hero" cuz he is just awsome and ya i love him!
so r they going to Izengod(sp?) ot Mordor? and will aragorn and everyone else get to mirkwood intime and elrond is going to be fine rite i mean, hello1 he is elrond and ya no how it said in aftermath that the dude blew the dust and everyone was healed, well, wat about legolas is some thing going to start to affect him again? i think it would be cool i like stuff like that and it would be cool(as i said before)e-mail if u r going to answer my question plese. venusgrl90@comcast.net
TheVampyrSlayer
2003-12-27
ch 9,
abuseNO! CLIFFIE! I HATE CLIFFIES! AH WAT IS GONNA HAPPEN TO MIRKWOOD'S KING AND WAT IS TO HAPPEN OF ELROND NO!NO!NO!NO!NO! I HATE CLIFFIES! BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THE STORY AND WHERE IT IS GOING WRITE SOON!
the evil witch queen
2003-10-27
ch 9, anon.
abuseuh oh. is aragorn or on of the others going to step in just in time and save elrond but be seriously injured? what did elrond mean by he found it envigorating?

thranduil thinks it's legolas and his sister who kidnapped him, doesn't he? they are in serious trouble.

keep up the good work!
cysne
2003-10-12
ch 9,
abuseROTK will be 4h 20min long?!?! YAY!! *dances around happily hugging everything in sight* *AHEM!*

What was that about with Elrohir?

MIRKWOOD HAS BEEN TAKEN?! Ohh, you're killing me with suspense, mellon!! Great, excellent, great, GRAND!! I *have* to know what's going on!

Oh well... I'm wagering Elrohir didn't get to sleep *too* peacefully, just thinking of that... eheh...

OO"!! Evil reflexions?... *faints* That is simply too much to deal with at the moment... just... brilliant!... AAHH!! *hugs szhismine* you're genial, mellon!

Lol, I know Elrond fought in the Last Alliance and all, but picturing him in a fight like that is just too... ROTFLOM! =)

Ahh, once again I humbly apologise for not reading this story for so long... but the wait was certainly worth it! You have done wonders! ;)

I'll be waiting for more, mellon! =)

Ps- you reviewed my story, "Of Dark Branches...". Thanks a million, that little chapter is very dear to me! Well, I'm not sure whether I will continue it or not. I'd love it, and I have this great idea for it too! But I've been having some troubles and all, and I've been busy... remember that promise of a sequel? That's another thing I have a good idea for but then never got to writing!... so...
Right now, I'm co-authoring a story. We haven't posted it yet, still working on it... It definitely keeps me occupied! I'd love it if you'd read it (love your reviews!) but then again, I'm not sure it's your type of story... bit of a humour fic with *very* little action/adv in it. I'm trying out new stuff at the moment...

Well, like I said, loved to hear *and* read from you! But especially the *read* part! eheh... =D
~ cysne
cysne
2003-10-12
ch 8,
abuse"a dizzy spell": what's that? Don't tell me Legolas broke his spine... just don't... *sniff!* my poor elf... I'll save you from these twisted writers! But you wouldn't be exactly safe with me either... probably worse... But that's not the point! The point is that I'm going to continue reading and talk about something else. Right?
cysne
2003-10-12
ch 7,
abuseAww... Eldarion is so cute! *ahem!* *looks around to see if anyone noticed*

CREEPY PENDANT THINGY!!
Darker and fouler things are at work here... VICTORY IS AT HAND! (oops... don't know how Saruman's line got here... guess I've been watching a *little* too much T than I should... Aww, 'tis bliss!... Have you seen the RotK trailer? Simply... BEAUTIFUL!!)

Oppressive forest... great job with the description! =)

Nassty orcssess... shooting Harathiel... hope she gets better!... but why does she want to go deeper into the forest? If I remember correctly (and I probably do because it was two minutes ago) in her dream Legolas and her were both killed! Does she seek death? Does she have some suicidal tendency you're not letting us on, dear mellon?... *taps foot*

ONWARDS!
cysne
2003-10-12
ch 6,
abuseoo?! Aiiïee!!
*Crumbles to her knees*
CHAPTER 9 ALREADY?!?!?! Where have I been?!?!
Sorry... tough summer... been busy... whatever other lame excuse you prefer... :P

LOL to Green Ears! I dunno why, though, all it reminds me of is Greensleeves!... Nothing to do with it, I know!

Woo... spooky! Imagine that! You just can't get a good night's sleep these days that big black thugs with shiny hoods have to come out to get you... *tisk, tisk, tisk* And worse of all, you have to meet their bosses... What a shame...
HEY! She's not some distorted dark version of Galadriel, is she? I remembered that because of the "blue eyes full of knowledge" thingy! Well, I'm almost sure it's not, but it would have been fun nonetheless!... Imagine the look on Celeborn's face when he found out! LOL!
And I'm wondering the guy is Saruman? Who else?... that's the worse part of Tolkien, you just don't have much variety on dark-lords-to-be, so you're always stuck with the same! ... unless, of course, you make up some one new...
HEY! You didn't make up someone new, did you? *pouts* Now, I'll have to wait to find out!...

A dream?... Why you... HURT THEM!! HURT THEM!! eheh... never mind me.

Saruman! Then I was right! Curse my little brilliant brain! eheh... don't mean to gloat or anything... well... LOL! ;D

OH! Excellent as always, mellon! Be right back for the next... uhh... *3* chapters! (You could have made life easier on me, you know...
BUT THEN I WOULDN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO READ, so...
=D YAY!

ok, talk about a random review...
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