Love it, please update soon

hm the flow was kinda bumpy. like it skipped from here and then suddenly there. it's confusing. but i like it. :D

i thought tommy was drunk. shudn't he let paris drice instead?

This was ok, but it struck me that Tommy seemed to just melt for her, which isn't exactly what you would expect for a hard cimelord, even if he does have a more vulnerable side under that hard shell (which we know he does, of course). It just seemed to all fall into place neatly, without much work on either side. I know that they knew each other in the past, but the poor man has been through a lot since then (15 years in jail, taking over a city, being backstabbed etc) and I think he would have more trust issues than he does in your story so far.

Nonetheless, it kept me interested to the end, which is more than can be said for most sappy romances :) so you must be doing something right.

Dig da way de Haitian talk, mon.

Bex

Wow, that was amazing. Your skill has DEFINITELY improved in the past two years :P. I really hope you update more often, you're doing a great job, I absolutely love this story. Update soon ;)

~Poison Ivory

Maybe its hormones talking, but everytime I read one of those flashbacks they bring tears to my eyes...

Anyway, I'm glad you updated this fic or else I would have never read it. Your writing has improved since the beginning of the fic and I can't wait until you update again =)

wooh u updated...keep up the good work

wtf, lol, i gave up on this story a long time ago. And suddenly it just pops up lol. this was a good chapter although short and no action. can't wait to see what happens next, see ya in two years!

oh!! I like this story so much! please update. you can e-mail me anytime too if you ever get bored cause I like Vice City and nobody around me really likes it, I mean heard of it. Anyways, a few words missing but I do it all the time too so no worries. I love it so far and it would be so cool if you updated.

Your story is really cool! The only bad bits are that it focuses on the romance too much. There has to be more action!

Good story. I like the pairing and the plot. Just brush up on Paris and Tommy's relationship. It seems kind of lacking -- emotional wise. Their emotional outbursts are somewhat odd but the story is great; a definite on my faves list.

Please continue this story is so awsome

PLEASE CONTINUE A.S.A.P.! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ^_^

Interesting story so far!! I like it!! ^_^

It's a wonderful, very well written story. Too bad you seem to have given it up =(