This is the first story I read of yours and it is going to make me continue down the list. You definitely have talent.
I want more.

awesome awesome awesome.
where is the rest of it though?

HM sven in new zealand ? this shall bbe scary !
please update

UPDATE

LOVE IT! please update!

UPDATE!
It's vair vair cool.
CONTINUE WRITING-NOW!

wow, this story is fantastic! please make a next chapter soon, I love it.

and if you could reply, that would be awsome. ^^

chloe

nice story, but robbie and mrs elvis? ew! gross!
are georgia n dave gonna get together? they should.
updatey.

OH!
Very origional.
I am at your command. But... ew, how old is Elvis's wife?
Then take away how old Robbie is.
And you get the age difference.
Erlack. Mrs Elvis Attwood is a cradle-snatcher!

Great, wonderful, awesome, fab. I hope to read more soon. And maybe Dave and Georgia will get together? Hm?

erlackk!! robbie cant do that! erlack! oh disturbing mental images. well, all that aside, i lurve your story and...i am a loony. i completely blanked out on what i was going to say. ah well, get on with it! i want to read some more! ahh. i am soo tired.

update. I want to know what happens to me and my LYING CHEATING WIFE

Ohmygiddygodstrousers. this was good as a... good thing. it was fanbloodytastic. fabbity fab fab.

sorry.. just had to get all that outta my system.

anywho, this story is great! I loved it and I really want to read more! the whole thing with Robbie is, uh, strange and creepy, to say the least. but its still really a very good story. so please update!!

cool story..

hey really good hope u update soon coz i wanna no de plan!!