Oh, I liked, I did. Especially the "message in the threads of these clothes" part. I absolutely loved The Great Gatsby, especially the style. I think you captured Daisy very well...weeping "stormily" and then quickly getting over it. Well done.

I liked it a lot. I like the short lines and frequent breaks... very.. idk.. captivating.. and yes i am a Gatsby fan to some degree ;D

That was really good! I'm in the middle of The Great Gatsby right now. I'm really enjoying it. This was a great fanfic!
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Hi! I love the way you weave all the different symbolism & imagery together in this piece. You put an interesting spin on Daisy's character. I particularly loved your imagery of Gatsby at the end (like a dying star). Pure brilliance :-). Keep up the great work, i'd love to see more Gatsby work!

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Very good and write more fan fic

I agree with the other reviewer; this captures their relationship perfectly.

Your writing had almost a sense of timelessness. The moment seemed to encompass everything. All in all, it was lovely.

This captures the spirit of Gatsby and Daisy's relationship perfectly. Nice job!