Is there an ending? It doesnt seem finished, is it?
It was interesting but i would like more of an ending, what happened to jou? Did he go to jail, is he still with seto so on and so forth?

Woah I was trying to wrap
my tiny brain around that
story lol, trying to figure
it out but I got no where,
so needed the explanation.

Wow what a story, I was well
confused I thought Jou had
actually killed his sister,
I never thought that it
could be Ryuuji with his
friend because he was jealous

Talk about going to far! 0_o

But wowy this was put 2geva
extremely well, I enjoyed
reading this, I hope yooh
write more interesting
stories soonies.

Woah sorry for the long
review *hehe*

x Casondrah Kiku x

this is a creepishly good no awesome story you really have a way with words

OMG
OMG
I can't believe your ending
OMG

Um...this is semi-confusing. Would it be considered a flame if I asked you to please not write something like this again? If it is, I'm sorry. T^T

Creepy, but cool. I'm glad you put in the explanation though, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to put the pieces together.

It's a pity that you have'nt up-dated this in so long, but I do suppose you have your reasons and whatever they may be. However I do hope you try and up-date in the next century or so.

Fabulous. It honestly took me about an hour to get through the first chapter itself, I just had to go over paragraphs and re-read them to make sure I was "getting it". You totally screwed with my head. The last line - 'Shizuka never left her door open' - or something to that effect - was perfect. I love how you left the story somewhat open-ended.. That was just amazing. ^__^

Thank you very much for explaining that. I read it at the contest site and desperately wanted to know what was going on! Marvelous story you've written, and congratulations on getting into the semi-finals!

Otogi is one sick **. Excuse my language. That's just the phrase that came to my head after reading your explanation. Wow. You have successfully screwed with my head. I love how it reads in a loop like that. Poor Jou-kun. Great story! Freaky, but very good.

Well, that explains it ^^
But it is NOT fair that Jou will be arrested for what Otogi did. *sigh*
Anyway, it is a good, bloody, twisted fanfic. (gee, that sounds weird...^^)

Now I get it! OTOGI, that bastard! I hope they get caught, MAN! Sorry I didn't see it before. Awesome story.

Geuna~

Ep. I said I'd review this for you, and never did. Sorry ^^;!

Anyhoo, It's really good, but the Jou post-cog thing was kinda abrupt. Jou killing Shizuka was so unexpected. Nice Otogi and Ryou red herrings ^^. But, why did he?

Your ending kills me X3;

um... I don't get it. I know you said in your notes that you left it vague for a reason, but that bothers me. I'd rather hear the author's verdict on who actually killed Shizuka... as it stands, I'm not happy with either of the culprits. Why couldn't it be Otogi? XP

oh, wow, this is REALLY good...i didn't imagine just HOW stiff the competition was gonna be for the fic contest...you've probably got it in the bag...