What a fool that boy is . . .

Plz keep this story going I love it and the last one. Clarice+Hannibal=

brilliant, brilliant... BRILLIANT!

Oh dear god, how could you leave it like that!

How dare you have a life!
*faints*


That was meant in good humour, honest. Eh hem, nice beginning, heart strings all duly tugged. V-e-r-y curious to know what would happen next but I guess after two update free years this story is probably abandoned. In the hope that you might pick it up again I'll story alert it.
Fingers crossed!

i really must compliment you , b/c you obviously think the goings-on and that makes it a great story to read. you could easily publish your stories and make millions. thank you for keeping me amused!!

As much as I'd prefer Clarice with Lecter rather than Will, this story is rather intriguing and I can't wait to see what you have in store. Please continue soon.

Welcome back, Holly! I too have fallen off the Lecterfic wagon -- 'Vista' is still unfinished after almost two years. (I have said that I'll finish it before my son graduates high school.)

A nice, angsty little chappie to throw Clarice into. Will's belief is understandable, and if there is anyone who could kill the GD, it would be Will or Clarice.

So...what's it going to be?

Whew. Holly. You have been missed something terrible.
*smiles* So...Holly, dear, are we gonna get some nice Joshie action in this story, eh? :D
*giggles insanely*
This should be exciting. Wow, Will sure is putting Clarice in a biscuit. Can't we all just get along? *innocent eyes*
Teehee! NO. ANGST! I CALL FOR MUCH ANGST AND SUFFERING AND DELEMMA! BEcause, without it, we wouldn't have much of a story.
Your still devoted fan,

*scrapes jaw off the floor*
Welcome back, Holly dear :)
We missed you so.
And quite a return it is.
Cannot wait to see what you've got in store for us next.
More soon, pretty please!

If you touch ONE HAIR on Hannibal's head, I will kill you.
Ta ta, GW
PS-kill William if possible, please.

I read both this and the Price of Infimy. You're a really talented writer and I hope you finish this story.

Clarice leaving the FBI? Say it ain't so! But then again she does have a family, and it sounds like Will doesn't work. (Which makes sense, as Dr. Lecter has abused him unmercifully in this series as well as in canon.)

So Dr. Lecter wants Clarice to get a quickie divorce (or worse...). The argument between Will and Clarice was a gem -- not sappy in the least, and Will's nerves versus Clarice's attempt at restoring peace and tranquillity were both excellently done.

Great chapter. Is a good thing you decided to go on with this fabulous fiction. I can't wait for the next chapter.

C

I will never get use to authors calling Clarice clair... putting that aside, it was great to finally get a new chapter in this great story, how you ever could torture your readers so I will probably never know...

I am still wondering if lecter and clarice ever will get together, there is the problem of the kids, so I am not that hopefull, it would be too difficult for clarice to run off with lecter, and even if she did take the kids that would be sad for will... have you thought of killing him off? will that is... ah well, perhaps too much.

I will look forward to the next instalment

I'm so glad you're continuing this and hope you find a way to reunite Clarice and Lecter- they belong together!