Storms eyes are ice blue

that was good...but I must say that I like some of your other stories more :) still, you're a greeeat author and I must bow before you *bow* :D

omg! I just sat here and read all 26 chapters and all I can say is wow! Everything about this story was amazing!

Lol you had me so sad at the end almst I thght she was dead and I was jus like everything they've been thrgh even with Jean n her jealousy but ill stop rambling awesome awesome story I'm like completely happy with the end just yay :)

this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

this was a cute story.

What a rush your fun I wished this all had visuals but being a fan and reading my bothers comic books made this very easy in in-vision. You had me on the edge

Thanks

I really like your stories they are compelling but this one has me a bit mad, and maybe thats what your trying to establish, but I find it hard to believe that this ordinary women can over take to very trained and experienced X-men

I'm diggin your stories, I have always been a fan of the relationship of Ororo and Logan, this one had me on the edge of my chair. Damn jean and she should let his ass go, lol you really held the essences of the complex story lines the X-men has always had.

Awesome story! Your writing style is incredible!

NICE story! I truly love it.

So cute!

Favorite part:

"I thought I needed to know my past - who I was, where I came from, but maybe you were right - this is my home, this is my family, where my heart is. Ororo, you're my heart, my home."

"Logan . . ."

He shook her head, silencing her. "It's you I want - you I love, Ro.

So sad..

Wow!

adorable!

So cute! I can see Logan's good side.