My god, the world has ended. I am actually crying because I'm so sad to see Riku dead. This is beyond bizarre for several reasons. First, before tonight I did not like Riku. This is maybe the fourth story of the night where I really like him. Second and more importantly, I never cry. Seriously. I saw "Titanic" and did not even feel the need to shed a tear. I watched my friends break down and become depressed in real life, and I still didn't feel this helpless to stop myself from crying. What does that say about both me as a person and you as a writer? You know, for something that started as nonexistent, I'm sure glad as hell that it's here. Without a doubt, one of the best stories I've read in...way too long...

I remember reading this story a long time ago and enjoying it, so I decided to reread it. Your writing is beautiful; the last chapter gave me chills. lol. Such a sad story...I loved it, though! Thanks for putting it up, you're a great writer. :)

I just finished reading it. I literally cried when Riku died. I LOVE this story it was REALLY good and descritive. *sighs* Got to love angst stories.

*sob* That was so sad! I cried. Now my keyboard is all wet. Did he have a brain tumor? This was such a good story! You wrote this so well! But it was so sad...I guess that's partly what made it good.

...wow this will be my favorite story of all times it's so deep u did a great job on this fic. ppl who read this beware it's a tear jearker. the absolute best fic of all times. i love it. even cried! it's so sad but one thing i hate is how sora treated kairi...the son of a **...riku should of called sora "rat bastard" i love it it's so sad i feel like i'm about to break down and cry right here rite now riku is the best. this could be a movie really no lie...you know as i'm writing the proud family is on so it kills the mood...i guess it's the comic relife (spelled dat wrong didn't i?)aww well...HEY A TEAR! NO I WILL NOT CRY NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NON NO NO NO NO NO!AND WAT THE HELL IS AN AUTHOR ALERT LIST!NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!...ok i guess i'm just ** dat riku died n' all i cool off soon...u know my friends say that i act just like him...very compitive...and stupid...but yet somewat smart and y the hell am i saying this aww well ...

didn't read yet but want to put on favorite stories

Omg! *sniff* such a lovely story! I'm gonna cry! I feel sorry for Riku, and i don't really like him! Keep your writing strong "hoy y manana"

Poor Sora. Lessee, girlfriend not happy w/ him, best friend wants to kill him, not so good for him, ya?

Gannondorf: Oh I'm not in the mood for that now...

Sephiroth: Oh what's the matter, get locked in the Sacred Realm again?

Gannodorf: Grumble...

I read the note thingy ma hickey at the end and to me it sounds like ur history teacher is like Professor Binns from Harry Potter. :)

Gannondorf: Grumble...

Me: Oh shut it or I'll call Link and Zelda.

L+Z: You called?

Sephiroth: NO! *Knocks L+Z to Pluto*

All except Sephiroth: O_O

*sniffle* oh that was *sniffle, sob* a great *sob sob sniffle* story! i can't *sniffle, sob sob* wait for the *sniffle, sniffle* sequel *sob*

I just wanted you to know that this is the only fan fic I've ever read that has made me cry. I hated knowing that Riku died... I hated it! I can only imagine Nadia's pain... And Kairi... I'm not fond at all of the Sora/Kairi pairing... But I still liked the story, as it got such an emotional response from me.

Wah! Stupid chapter 7 is't working! All the others are though... :( Oh, well I read the story a long time ago. :(

Oh my GOD, I have read this thing SO many times and I still love it and it still makes me wanna CRY! *sobs* It's so GOD!! And SO EEVIL!

Just so you know, i'm re-reading this and its still AMAZING! You did such a wonderful job.

And because i know what happens my heart is pounding with every chapter. You are a great writer!

Your a great writer the decriptions and everything else. At frist, i have to tell the truth and say that i didnt really like it because it reminded me to much of a Soap Opera but it just gets better as u read and this last chapter was great. It acctully caused a few tears and few stories or movies have that effect on me. I really liked the story. *gives it 5 out of 5*

its the most wonderful thing i've ever read (accept KingdomHearts? becuz I'm in that)