Wow...holy guilt batman...heh. Excellently done.

Paige

This goes straight to my favourite story list.

Wow very sad and thought provoking. Please continue with your great stories.

Wow...that was good, really good. I enjoy your stories, please continue.

oh wow. that was dark. but so well written. what an original take. you rock.. i like your style. just wow. *sorry, the diet coke [yuk! but it's the only softdrink in the house] i've been drinking has made me brain dead*

Dang...that was twisted. Good...but twisted. Reminds me of something from Twilite Zone...
It's a very good story ^.^