Reviews for Allusions of Power

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sesshoumaru4me 2008-10-06 ch 15, anon.	abusei like it, i would love to see him break the charms dumbledore set on snape, if he did. Good job!
darkxangelx-xo 2008-10-01 ch 15,	abuseextreamaly wicked so far i truethfully cant wait for more!
OccAmy Phyre 2008-09-26 ch 15,	abuseI know it's been 5 years but I do hope you pick this up again someday. It has a fascinating premise and I really want to read more! Cheers!
goldenspecs 2008-09-03 ch 15,	abuseGreat story
BloodyRose622 2008-08-07 ch 15,	abuseplease update again soon! I love this story!
softmouse 2008-08-06 ch 15,	abuseplease update soon. if you don't i will send an army of cute fluffy critters to invade your dream until you do.
Celestrail 2008-07-27 ch 15,	abusePlease Update Soon, Thank You
keichan2 2008-07-24 ch 15,	abuseI discovered this story yesterday, and I have to say that I really like all the complexity you added to the magical world (the subsurface Knockturn Alley, runes, the way magic tend to render objects sentients, ...) I confess that, not being gay myself, I'm not attracted by slash stories... But given how captivating your story is, I might very well continue reading after your story reach this point... Whenever you will update to this point... (hint-hint, nudge-nudge) Please, update soon!
Is Belle 2008-07-17 ch 10, anon.	abuseI have to say that I'm really enjoying this story. I also have to say that this chapter pretty much creeped me out what with Dumble's magical manipulations of everyone and everything. Reminds me of the "Body Snatchers". Regarding ships at 12, I agree that it shouldn't be the focal point of the story therefore it could wait. Right now, Harry is trying to figure things out and how he's going to win agains Dumbles and his "Power". 12 is to young anyways and depending on how long this story goes, 15 or 16 should be good enough because that is technically the age of consent. Looking forward to your next update. Thanks.
k13cat 2008-07-06 ch 15,	abuseI do hope you continue this story, I am quite enjoying it & there are a lot of interesting plot points. I will say that the chapters you preface with 'i rushed this' or something to that effect show that fact (ex. ch. 9) as those are the ones where your narrative gets a bit muddled & plot holes turn up. Needs some work with spelling errors, word misplacement. But the ideas are here--they're engaging, different and I want to see what happens. Having a beta or even a friend read it through can catch a lot of the technical problems. From your a/n I can see you got a lot of flack for stating this will be slash. Ignore it, a 12 year old isn't likely to act on those feelings beyond fantasy & this is an AU, not canon. There's a nifty 'home' button that will let anyone stop reading at any time. Repeating, I so hope you continue this story or let us know otherwise.
darkwolfslayer 2008-06-23 ch 15,	abusewow! this is an absolutely great read. you haave just made my day. the story line is so very believable except for some minor grammar problems here and there, it was just wonderful to read. is harry going to be a dark lord, neutral or is he going to follow dumbledore's plans? i wonder... oh well, i do hope you update soon!
Draeconin 2008-06-19 ch 5,	abuseHarry has just had his arm broken, has told the Masons that, and you have Mrs Mason suggest they go out to eat? Sure, she mentions they'd go to a doctor afterward, but wouldn't getting Harry's arm taken care of be a slightly higher priority? Have you ever had a broken bone?
Draeconin 2008-06-19 ch 2,	abuseA very interesting twist! I do suggest you try to find a GOOD beta, however (there are many bad ones). You have words missing or misplaced in some of your sentences.
wolfzmasterz 2008-06-15 ch 15,	abusehay i love the storya lot and i cant wait to read more. i agree compleatly with you on the slash idea it realy should be more of an undertone that does come up just not the main theam of the story so well i have to go so ill read ya later byb
Isolde Eris 2008-06-05 ch 15,	abuseGREAT JOB! I can't wait for ur update!

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