Long but definitely worth reading but definitely not when im in a good mood if I don't want to get deppresses.

This was a very, very good read..and I've been there letting a story right itself...

Thanks for the good read

Really nice.

This is a excellent end to a price paid in blood.

OMG...i cant believe i missed this. YOU HAVE SO MUCH TALENT! this thing, this DAMNED STORY MADE ME CRY! i hate u! well not true entirely but still, i HATE U! Ah what the heck, I LOVE U! I LOVE UR STORY! IT WAS SO TOUCHING!

Yea, it's been almost two years since you've writen this, but I must say, it's incredible. You have an amazing talent for writing, and I hope you never stop. This is the only story I've read that (don't take this the wrong way) has made me want to vomit from the emotion it released. (That just seems to be a reaction of mine in cases of strong emotion) You have a real talent, and I'm just glad you are sharing it with the rest of us.

Awe inspiring. This story is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I wish I knew what they talked about, but I like the fact that you kept parts of it private.

The idea of Chi-chi's diary was amazing. Such simple touches in the diary made the story snap with emotion. Nicely done.

that has to be a scary thing to read... well written!

OH my god ... I loved this story I almost broke down in tears . I barely finished it and I had a tear in my eye. I just could'nt beleive how heartfelt and compassionant this story is. You need to keep on writing . I'm going to add you into my favorite authors list...if that's o.k. You rock so hard...and screw anyone who doesn't like it .

Yours truly, BlackTigerG2

I LOVED IT!LOVED IT LOVED IT!

good. i liked it. seemed really realistic.

wow! you're an amazingly good writer! this story was great!

it's 12:17 AM and i can't think of anything creative to say beside "good job" and "well written" ::yawns:: it really was good, it's just that my brain doesn't work well at this time of night...er...morning...bleh...it hurts to think... ::yawns again:: keep up the "i got bored during fourth peroid" stories...your stories written out of boredom seem to be the best...hm...i actually did come up with something semi-creative to write...hehe...ttfn! .

Wow. This was a really good story. Wow. Wow. This was the best story I ever read. Wow, wow, wow. Great job! You should write a sequel!
Hannah

This was a beautifully written, emotionally deep- ploted fic, and I loved it! I could never write somethin as good as this! Bravo!