 saltatrix puella 2009-11-20 . chapter 48hey, I know this story was posted quite a while ago but Istumbled across it quite by accident, and all I have to say really is WOW!
I've enjoyed reading it so much it's kept me awake all night so I could finish it! blending myths into this was a beautiful idea and your characterisation of them was amazing. There are obviously improvements to be made to certain aspects(spellings, completion of story arcs etc), but as this was written such a long time ago, I'll skip past those and just say...WOW...again!
:D |
 Magi.Narr. 2009-11-18 . chapter 26I had to laugh at the part where you started describing Ron's behavior inside Gryffindor. I Was telling myself, Wow, this seems a lot like Nazi Germany. And then i continue reading only for you to mention Nazi Germany in the next sentence.
Awesome. |
 jonayla 2009-11-13 . chapter 48It's a great story! I really loved it. some sad parts (poor Harry betrayed by almost everybody some funny parts ( I loved the pranks really!) And well the wholle story was just great!!
Love,
Jo |
 darksidhe42 2009-11-12 . chapter 48um...wow. That was epic. And I have to give you credit for having some romance in the story without making it dominate the story. I really can't even touch on all the things I loved about this story. I wish I had reviewed as I read, but I just couldn't tear myself away long enough to type anything. I'm still not sure what my favorite scene was, either. I'm thinking it's when Ginny told Mrs Weasley that Ginny Weasley was dead. I loved that. I also liked when Charlie took over the family, and I love the way Ron was so believable. Not IC... but then, that was one of the premises of the story, and I really love the way that you took his personalty in a logical direction... Like when he was getting mad at Herm the second time, after he hit her... And I like the way you showed in the dark lord's memories about how he always thought of Hogwarts as home... Well, I could bable on forever. But just... WOW. Thank you so much for sticking with this to the end. And for ending it when the story was done. And thanks for sharing. |
 rushiruhua 2009-11-04 . chapter 1"He sent a letter off to Headmaster Dumbledore, requesting more books from the library, sighting Voldemort’s return and his own need for more information on defending himself from hexes and curses. "
It's citing, not sighting. Like a citation. |
 Doni 2009-11-04 . chapter 48Damn fine story! You put a lot of thought and effort into it and it was very enjoyable. Nice work! |
 mrs moonie 2009-10-29 . chapter 32 Don't get me wrong. I wrote a review earlier.I love this story it just seems like dumbledore is letting all the wrong people run over him .Where was he when the aurors came to the school?Why did he not intervene before the girl got the kiss? How was the fox able to breech the wards to meet lavender so many times? Just a few things thats on my mind. Still love the story though. |
 mrs moonie 2009-10-29 . chapter 32 Why is dumbledore such a punk in this story? He can't help anyone.The m.o.m comes in the school and he just backs down? How is he cowed by fudges threats? I just don't understand. |
 Caramel13 2009-10-27 . chapter 48 whe...
anyways, second time through, and yup it's still great :)
also saved my mind from school stress...and served as an annoying distraction, as i didnt really want to stop reading. oh well. |
 the teddy of death 2009-10-26 . chapter 48wow... this story is great... I don't know how one can come up with stuff like this but I'm glad that people like you do! I love this story because it develops and even though it's long one wants to find out what happens next after every chapter! |
 afraidofreality 2009-10-23 . chapter 19“The names Mr. Potter may – omit, due to misguided optimism,” Severus said dryly, ignoring Harry’s scandalized expression. Sirius cocked his head to one side and looked Snape in the eye. The Slytherin was regarding him evenly, with barely any trace of a sneer on his face. The animagus slowly reached out and took the scroll from the other man, nodding faintly as he did so. Snape nodded once, sharply, in reply, and then folded his arms into his robes, drawing them around him like a protective shield. Sirius watched him for another moment, before returning to the couch. Well, that was unexpected, Sirius thought privately before the two older Gryffindors set to dragging out all possible information from the young man. Unexpected indeed.
Is that supossed to be snape with the inner monologe? not sirius? |
 TamyTwilighted 2009-10-08 . chapter 16I totaly LOVE this strory! You are brilliant! Thanks so much for writting this art piece. |
 Rosie 2009-10-06 . chapter 17 Hey I'm loving the story. Just like to point out that Ginny's name is Ginevra not Virginia. :) other than that awesome story! |
 TutelaTwin 2009-10-06 . chapter 48This story was absolutely incredible. You took the Celtic gods, and kept them true to their nature, the famous warriors that became gods because of their people, and yet they remained the powerful icons they became as well. Most excellent.
Y'know, you really feel sorry for all of them at the end. Albus and Hermione are tearing themselves up with guilt, Harry's suffering from his problems and all his family are suffering with him. Poor Draco. He's going to be shattered when Harry dies. Hopefully it's not for a comparably long time. From what I got, he'll never live to old age, but he deserves at least to middle-adulthood. |
 Nathali 2009-09-27 . chapter 44An interesting story. However, I found that it was really hard to feel anything other than hate for the half the characters and sad for the rest. There is no emotional variety brought out by the story, which made it somewhat unpleasant to read.
Also, the constant torture of Harry was highly unrealistic and, by about midway through the story, I wanted to stop reading as I found it annoying that Harry seemed obsessed with self-torture and that, despite your descriptions of Harry being weak and fraile, he not only KEPT it up, but the others allowed him.
I can honestly say, that while you have the ability to write a story, you seemed more concerned with torturing the characters than realisticly explaining things. I'm sorry, but I can't finish this story, it's just not a good read. |