 East Coastie1500 2004-06-02 . chapter 1u gotta keep this going! i wanna know who the Hunter is! i didn't think Trandoshans hissed like that...yes yes, keep going |
 Grand Admiral Thraawn 2003-12-22 . chapter 1 Great potential.
Be careful to avoid short sentances; often they can be remidied with other punctuation or conjunctions. Still, though, keep going.
The Hunter sound, to me, like a bounty hunter that
a) Has plenty of resources, skills, weapons etc.
b) Wants to have the bounty hunter feild all to himself. By killing Fett, Bossk, (DarkFire!) and others, he will have no competition.
c) May have very large, complex plans, like Xizor.
d) is very "Cool" (I have never yet come across an acurate synonim for cool, when used in that context)
Very promising. |
 yaeb 2003-09-11 . chapter 1 good job. I would like it if u updated soon. it is interesting. Boba Rcoks. jango is cool too. a clone, who woulda thunk it. |
 Breann 2003-08-13 . chapter 1 NO! You must finish it!
Please excuse me while I type in ideas to keep the story going.
Jodo Kast as the Hunter?
Xizor as the Hunter?
Fett kills a bunch of people? ...Wait...he always does that...
Ack! No inspiration! I can't help! I am useless! *starts sobbing uncontrollably* |
 Rhys 2003-06-22 . chapter 1Whee. Good parting shot. Sounds like a good beginning! I hope you do continue it!
*Maybe it's some freakazoid warrior-person who has decided tha honor demands that he/she/it/them control all the bounty hunters? And why not start at the top? After all, you keep creeping up with the losers from the bottom and you'll take forever. Get Fett, and a third of the rest will come over too. Anyway, hope either that or someone else manages to get the plot bunnies in gear, because this looks like a cool start. -A Fellow Fett-Fan ;) |
 Vandesdelca 2003-04-24 . chapter 1Seems very promising. I would like to know who this Hunter is and what he (or she) has up his(or her) sleeve. |
 Kitty Fett 2003-04-24 . chapter 1Oh, I hope you do decide to continue this; it's a good start, and I'd love to find out who is brave and/or stupid enough to try to hunt Boba Fett.
One thing that wasn't clear, though, is who Tassik is. He seemed to come from nowhere, without explanation.
But you've just GOT to continue! |
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