Lebaron having bastard.

'Nother good chapter. Try to lengthen them and take more time before releasing. They seem to get dished out as only several tiny scenes to one big episode.

If that's your intent fine, but if there's more, lengthen to encompass the whole.

Bishi hunting is intolerant and racist! You ** **-**-**!

That's what I'd say if I were a fairy. Thankfully, I'm not. This story getting better = I read on. Ja.

Good.

A different approach to a Spike-survival story.

I LOVE this story... I haven't read such a great Bebop story in a while. Well, a serious non humor one that is ^ ^ I cant wait to see what happens next! Congrats on your car! ^ ^ Get mine in 2 years...
-Takeuchi Mae CHAN

oh spike is mean now hmm interesting very interesting i like it tho awesome you get a car i want a car but no it will never happen

Very interesting, so far. Wow, a Chrysler LeBaron? Nice. Anyway, why are Jet and Faye married? Did they lose their minds after Spike died?

...No seriously, did they?

Hehe! Dis rules! Pweeze update soon!
Spike-person's a cyborg, in't he?!
I knew it, it's a conspiricy man!

you should name it the swordfish II if it's red! woo what if jet and faye get into marital troubles when they find spike again. wo!!O

Lucky! I want a car for my birthday. I still have time to pass the road test. Heehehehe. Well, I'm liking this so far. But, if Jet and Faye got together...i'll learn to deal with it i guess.

Awesome story hmm who is that guy it has to be Spike but like how man you are tricky and HAPPY BIRTHDAY or if i am late saying it HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY

Interesting so far! This is a very well-done spin on a classic idea, run with it! And update soon!

This is getting good! I hope you update soon, because now things will definatly heat up for the old Bebop Crew! Keep it up!

Aye, nice and neat. Very structured - a well established start. They say that it's the first sentence that must grab a person's attention, but starting with spoken text is always an attention seeker too. Ya, I'd like to read more as it's submitted.

Intriguing story so far, but I can't figure out what will happen next; so, think hard! Well, happy (early? late? late :. ) birthday. My first car is going to be a giant robot!

Interesting AND relatively well written. Update soon.