That was very good, though not all of us know the japanese words you use, I would suggest writing down what the mean at the end, or in parentheses or something.

THIS KICKS **! Update soon, please! (faves)

Hi there. I love this story its great. Um yeah have you forgetten this story or are you not going to continue it.
Thanks

that's beautiful!

*gasp*

The first thing that I would like to say is:

Please, please watch your grammatical errors. Or tenses, as this case may be:

"Inuyasha, who was stunned by what the girl has done quickly dodged the strong funnel of wind that was sucking everything up."

That should be: "Inuyasha, who was stunned by what the girl -had- done, quickly dodged the strong funnel of wind that was sucking everything up." ("has" is present tense, and "had" is past tense. If you are writing down thoughts for any specific character, you should use italics to make sure your readers understand that a character is thinking something, rather than just -narrating- that the character is thinking. Eg (I'm making this sentence up) Instead of "Despite what she went through, he thinks she can get through this.", you should put it in italics and put it in a spot where the readers will know which character is thinking that specific thoughts, and word it something like this: "Despite what she had went through, he thought she could possibly make it through this." Be careful when using verb tenses.

Other small things, such as using "can" when you should have used "could" (back in Chapters 1 and 2). You may think I'm nagging at you but it can be really annoying to read a story when you switch from past tense to present tense back to past tense, even if it's only 2 or 3 times for each chapter. The switch should not be there at all. Trust me, it'll make the story even better than it already is.

Now for the good comments! I enjoy reading your descriptions. The portrayal of the characters is pretty accurate, and the intentions of the angel-demon (the creature) were very well planned out.

Another word of warning: export Chapter 4 (I think it was Chapter 4) and remove the lyrics. The site is planning to remove all accounts that have songfics!

But good story. As I look up to where it says Published and Updated, I see that you haven't added a chapter for a very long time. Taking -months- to update can help make people forget what happened in your story, you know. But good story so far.

wow...really AWESOME! update REAL soon!

It's getting good...and a little confusing to my small brain mind you. ^_^ lol keep up the good work!

wow, just wow O_O

cool chappie! keep up the good work!

Wow...this is really deep. Is there going to be more?

~Britt

Hail no that Yoru wench won't be getting Miroku - nuh uh, no siree! Injured or not, I think Sango would tear the demoness limb from limb if she so much as tried to touch him!

Ok, I'll stop with that rambling right now... But I can just say, I loved Crucify my Love, I loved Damaged, and I am loving Night Storm. I've said it before, but I'll say it again - you have a superb writing style, and your narrative is awesome. You have great plots to your stories, and you have just the perfect blend of angst, action, and sweetness. I applaud your skills - I can only hope to someday get the same wonderful balance!

Please update soon, and often! I'm eager to hear more - and I hope there are many more sequels to come!

I don't really think you know the meaning of update. But, for god's sake lady bloddy update!!Or if you have just forgotten your loyal fans then, so be it. but I don't really fancy people like you, who build up peoples hopes then smash them down when you bloddy feel like it, but oh well. tootles

i know its been a while since u updated but please update again, this story is too good to just let it sit there unfinished, it is so good and a lot of ppl like it. please update this wonderful fic!

You must continue, Jo-chan-sama!! I'm obsessed with your Sango/Miroku work and want you to CONTINUE!