Not continued? Aw, what a shame. You're superb at physical details and the story is paced very well. Great job!

Superb storytelling. A cool omake at the end.

Woah...so what, Integra's been strung and hung?

delicious.

Delightful.

LOL omakes make me laugh my ASS off...and the plot thickens...*nods* Must reads more. XD

This is very interesting and in character. I love seeing Walter in action. I look forward to the next chapter. The omake sections are hilarious.

It's getting much more interesting. It's nice to see that Walter is back in action. It would really be something if Alucard and Walter fought together in a battle (*hint, hint* Unless you've already got that in mind? That would be so awesome! ~_-) Until your next installment, Ja!

too short!! must have more! hurry! hurry! hurry! LOL ^^;

seriously, story was great. and the omake too.

Funny Omake, esp the third one ;D Good storyline.And nice characters-portrayed.I luv how you describe Alucard =)Well, there's not much to revealed int the 1st chapter so go and write the next one!!Also,update your other fics will you? ;D

This is great start and I look forward to finding out why Alucard felt the need to suddenly dash to the Tower. I liked the interaction between Alucard and Celes, probably because I'm partial to these Master and subordinate moments. Hope to read more from you soon. Until next time, Ja!

Great start, very good description & I love how you're writing Alucard. I'm very interested to see where you go with this - hope to see more soon! ~Stella

i like. this is interesting so plz continue and get the next chapter out soon! please?

Very nice. Good grammar and spelling, excellent description, firm grasp of the characters. I loved the omake, especially the one about the microwave. I'm looking forward to reading more.