I like the fact u write in present tense - it's refreshing, but u slio sometimes, so proofread more carefully.
OMG - u made me feel sorry for DM! Some v. powerful descrips(watchedit tremble and cave in). Of course the trios lost - it's not a trio nemore. Like his speech, and ur fics.
(PS did u decide to give him the middle name James, or has it been said in interview?)
Thanks
(PPS - u seem to feed on Angst, pls rr my fic "too close for comfort" It's v. depressing).

Very dark, very sad. Will you write any happier Harry/Draco stuff. You're very good. Thanks.

NayNymic

aw you're not nice!! you're making me cry!!

really.

This is an amazing story, beautifully written and wonderfully told. I'm seriously bawling right now!

I have to go read your other fic, the FALLING one.

You have amazing talent. Use it!