awesome story
very cute ending ;)

You know, its a great story, but um next time, spellcheck would be wonderful...just a small sugguestion. Also this should probably be rated M instead, the subject matter is pretty dark, and the descriptions are kinda graphic

Cool, grammer was a bit iffy in places but otherwise great fic. Knew Ma-kun would come through for both sides-that was good as was Hiro's scene with Yuki right upto then getting to Tohma's. Other bits were good too. Only the ending didn't quite do it for me, however I am not entirely sure why ^_^

awesome! great work! i love it!

I would LOVE to finish reading this story, but I am very tired... I just got back from Homecoming dance and it's really late, so I'll put it on my fav. list and continue it later... it's really good so far! Hope everything turns out okay >

I really liked you're story...but...I did have one problem...I know it is really fun to use Japanese in stories and such what...but...not everyone can read thah much Japanese, making it hard to understand. But other then that I loved it! Keep writting...but next time...pick ONE language and stick to it!!

That was very good. ;-)

I wish you hadn't ended it so quickly, though, it had a lot more potential for development.

Absolutely AWESOME!

So far! So good. For some reason I always did want those pictures made public even though its just in fan fic. I know I'm sad...

it's a great beginning, hope that it's all that great!

It's a beautiful ending! I love it! I even got emotional over it... aw... so love the two of them.
Congrats for completing such a sucessful story.

Another chapter well done! ^_^
Shuichi has this tendency to keep waking up at the most important moments that i felt it kinda pulled down the credibility of the story. Maybe because i'm reading all the chapters at one shot?
But i like how everything is turning out, although we know the hero never dies (luckily it's a fruit knife hehe.. ). Nice touching chapter ending with Shuichi being the baka as he is again hehehe..

Great story! Love the excitement, characters and the rape. But there are just too many doors unlocked or not closed properly for a crime like this. o_O
Example... They're talking about killing and raping someone with their front door ajar. Duh!
They're raping a screaming Shuichi with the bedroom door wide open and worse, without closing the front door properly. Either they have very cooperating neighbours or there's really nobody around at that time. :P
The characterization of them (gravitation characters) are very good, i can even 'hear' or 'imagine' their voices throughout the story.
Overall, well done. ^_^

I guess I can forgive you for making Aizawa that much of a bastard. I don't like mushy Yuki/Shu fics all the time, but this was alright.

This is such a good story!
Please tell me you will write other gravitation one that are sequels/related to this story!
I luv drama/angst...