OMG! Thats so sad! I love the story!!

It was totally surreal to read your story where my name kept popping up... btw, it wasn't very good

Please don't tell me this is the last chapter! I love this story and I really want to keep reading! Please update?

so was that the last chapter?!?! cause i definitley think that it shouldnt be! please please update!!
~*~Mack Smack~*~

I heart ur fanfic! Don't stop here--keep going! Go into more detail w/ Tawnia, and ur good 2 go!

keep going it is good

aw...is there more? I LOVE IT!

oh ok she's from Tulsa. that explains all the hick-ness. and the fuzz...oh that darn fuzz...

ps: humor me and let her nickname be Wonka

um...WHAT THE HELL KIND OF NAME IS "WILLA"? where you from, one of those square states in the middle somewhere? or is this character simply a female incarnation of a certain eccentric chocolate factory owner that we all know and love?

:'( *cries* That's so sweet! Are you going to do another chapter, like if Squid and Willa meet up? That would be wicked. I love how you write, its brillaint. PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Lady Em-Chan

that was a great story. are you gonna write more to it. cause i wanna know what happens to jewel and squid. and tawnia and x-ray. please write like an epilouge or something.

oo. very good fanfic! u must continue! i love it! Willa has to get bac to Squid somehow! update! please. :D

(ok, please excuse my cussing) DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU! T.T YOU MADE ME CRY! I AM LITERALY CRYING HERE! *sob* PLEASE TELL ME YOUR STORY ISN'T OVER! PLEASE! I LOVE IT! T.T

PLEASE! PLLEASEE TELL ME THIS ISN'T THE END!! I want Jewel to be pregnant!! I t would make the story more interesting WHEN youy decide to continue. Update SOON ok? OK!:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Great story! Are you going to continue or is this the end? I thought that chapter 17 was so sad. Please continue. I want to know more! Must find out what happens!