Hi there, great chapter, I just wanted to say, please keep up the great work, and if you don't mind, arigato ne for the update and great story, I'm rooting for ya, matta ne!

Agh! Update soon!
I really like this fic...just a suggestion though...break your paragraphs up a little more, so that it's easier to read. The formatting on kinda sucks for that lol. o I wanna know what happens next!

Update! Nya!

good story. wow. very interesting.

i kept thinkin of harry potter.

well hope you update soon

this is the only story i read with rin having miko powers. i do hope u continue with this story. i just LOVE sess/rin stories. they are my favorite couple. so please...do continue to update this story.

Very nice indeed,but PLZ continue chap.4 i can't wait!!

Your prose is riveting. Absolutely breathtaking. :D

You mention at the end of this chapter in your notes that Rin is still 14. However, you've already talked about her sixteenth and seventeen summers.

haha, stinks of pedophelia. Where's Sesshoumaru when you need him?? I can't wait to find out what happens next, so please update soon!

Just a question... in chapter 2 you describe Rin learning to fight at 16, but in 3 it seems like she's 14 again. Am I reading this wrong?

Rin gave her captor a "saucy" look?! That can't be true! It just can't! It must be from the youkai's POV and not the real thing.
I wonder why Rin didn't just sit down and wait? But then I suppose the demon could just somehow pick her up.
Anyways, I'd like to see my questions answered in the form of a story, so I hope you update.

I don't think they sat in chairs back then in Japan, the tables were low and people sat on their legs on the floor and still do.
Ew! The lord's son touched her?! If she doesn't want him killed, maybe they could chop off a finger as a warning like in the Yakuza! LOL! Okay, that's a little gross. Speaking of the yakuza and chopped fingers, I wonder where they put the fingers, are they thrown away or buried? Enough of that...
It's spelled Konnichiwa, there are 2 n's.
Ouch! Poor Sesshoumaru's hair! But it looks so silky, it would be funny if you grabbed at it only to have it slip through your hands because of how smooth it was.
Why is he in pieces?! I guess I'll find out next chapter.

bee-chan... I'm surpried and glad that you finally update this fic... You are always so vigilant on continuing with A/M pairing in RK that it seemed Inuyasha's S/R pairing seems a little neglected... Great chapter as it contains the violence that the orginal Rumiko Takahashi's work of blood and gore... Yes... i realised that somehow there are quite a few so-called evil characters that I can't help but like and be fascinated with... such as Naraku of course... *grins* However, I suppose this is only applicable to bishounen youkais... *laughs* Hope you will update this fic more consistantly soon. :0)

sounds good!! keep writing!

Aww no, please write some more! I've been waiting for an update. I love Sess/Rin stories! This new demon sounds very interesting, but I can't picture anyone looking better than Sesshoumaru.