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Reviews For: adam and eve

Crimson_Tears 2004-03-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseOhh! OH! You can't do that! Oh...It's was so sweet and... so sad! I hate you.
spinnerofdark 2003-11-13 ch 1,	abusespiffie
Pedagogue 2003-11-09 ch 1,	abuseLovely, lovely piece.
Clear Skies 2003-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow... I \|love\| DIR shorts, specially ones like these. I also hate being taken advantage of when I'm melancholy and sugar-deprived, because I'm crying now :)
Ashura 2003-06-18 ch 1,	abuse...I might have been wandering about ff.net looking for new things and stumbled on this again. Every time, it gives me shivers, you know: 'Be, Will Stanton, be.' I love your Bran. Some people are so good at writing the way he speaks, I am not, but you are. adores
Sam Davidson 2003-05-14 ch 1,	abuseNice little story- nice sentiment. I did get a little confused though about who was saying or doing what at some pouints (a little clarification could fix that easily). It also seemed, well, a little shallow. Was there any background to their romance? Was Will surprised when Bran kissed him? I think it would be great if you really wanted to flesh this out into a full story (not that I ever could- i'm awful at that kind of thing). Anyway, nice job.
anaonymous 2003-04-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseMy one issue with this story is that you didn't capitalize the title; it looks sloppy. Other than that, this is a really well-written story. I enjoyed reading it! Short but sweet!