Mean old bugger! AMy I point out that the text is hard to decipher as it is so close + full stops and capital letters are mixed up.
Good plot. Chapter length - well - what can I say?
I like this.

Best wishes
jogreenleaf

It's really touching and sad. It made me cry. You do write a good short fic.

Brilliant!! really exciting!

Oh my goodness you scared me near the end! Thank God he's alive! I really do hope you continue, something like a Carter/Benton friendship story, where Benton realizes he should show his emotions and feelings more after the accident. Keep it up!

Sequel!!

Aww thats so good. I'm so glad carters fine and well done for persevering with it, it was worth it!

Thank you for finishing the story. It is great.

Whoa, you had me in shock thereat the end! Good story, and I hope there *is* a sequal!

This is great! I'm so glad Carter made it out alive. ...Mason is insane... Great fic!

This story is great but the dialouge's all clumped up that it makes it harder to read.Could you please try to seperate them.It would definately be great.Thanks!

Could you please make the story easier to read by separating the dialog? I'm usually a fast reader but I just spent 25 miuntes on this chapter because I kept getting lost.

Other than that, it's a great story.

Beck

oh what was great! are you going to put up and other chapter? i think you should just to tell us what happens. that was really great i was on hte eage of my seat. i thought he was going to die. i don't know how many times i can say it but thatwas really great. never stop writing
love always
Darc

Great story...I would love to see a sequel!

ah yay! u didnt kill him! i want a sequel! :)

Wow is all i can say, i read this story twice and I love it. I hope you do more carter storys .your a really great writer