A bold new angle on a story frame that has nearly been worn raw by poorer efforts than this. I really liked how you changed how everyone around the situation changed how they acted instead of just on or two of the principal characters. I look forward to reading your works in the future!

Hehehehe. Interesting twist.

I am overwhelmed by the information that this fic throws at me. You really need to pace the action in this piece. This fic seems to be...running almost, without taking a breath every once in a while. It seems to be entirely:

action
action
action
action
/ scene transition
action
action
action
/ repeat

The scenes are very short and almost completely composed of actions. Not only that, almost all of the actions are dialogue, which makes this fic seem only slightly more developed than a script. Please do something about the timing of events in this fic.

Another very imaginative idea! Very amusing; and it shows a Shampoo that can be at least as cunning as Cologne. I have to confess I'm interested in seeing whether Ranma does get his memory back on it (as that would make clear his emotional attachment to the curse), and more on how the school reacts; but I think you made the right choice in ending it here; the story ends on a very nice note, rather than trickling off.