Another very nicely written story!
Love your style of writing
Keep up the WONDERFUL! work!

I like this one. It is always refreshing to see the story from the character's point of view. However...Is it bad to root for the 'bad guy'?

^_^ Interesting. This is at least better than the other things I've seen you write. Please continue.

This sounds interesting! Now that I'm intrigued, I need to read the next chapter! Keep going!

Wow...Continue!

Really cool start, but try to make the chapters longer.

Wow...I mean, that's all I can say...just, wow...this is freaky, cool, and nerve-wracking all at the same time...you have incredible skill as a writer...you'd better put up some more chapters!