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| thegreatblsama 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was so cute! ^_^ I love this pairing, so i was especially happy. Bravo! |
| luxun 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegrah gafkor you#$%^&%&^^$ing ** |
| katsa5 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuse(The ironic part was that my boyfriend and I had just played the game: me Lu Xun and him Gan Ning. Winner kiss Loser. But anyways. . . ) *applause* Not bad at all. Nice Mood. Nice description. Heck, I can see that happening, really. Too bad game graphics and/or book pages are not more permitting. The approach is a little tryte, but it doesn't really matter in the long run, really. By the ending, satisfaction. The ending seems to 'sudden' though. Possibility of a sequel, mayhaps? |
| Eres 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuseCute! I like it! |
| KiritoJun 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseKya very nice,sweet.I like it alot,you should continue unless its just that short.But I really love it! |
| SheisNoLongerHere 2003-04-25 ch 1, | abuseO_o... IT'S SO PRETTY! I really like it, Lizzie-chan... for that... ENDLESS SUPPLY OF ZHANG HE PULSHIES! *earth trembles as the plushies swarm from the closet* |