   The Otaku of Superness 2003-05-20 . chapter 5WAH! Poor DIlandau! *cries* WAH! I love this but... did Van HAVE to kill him?! WAH! |
 Blue Eyed Canadian Author 2003-05-19 . chapter 5BECA: It's over? *puppy eyes* Please go with the idea of an alternate ending! Or that idea about meeting his victums in hell. I like that.
Chibi Dilly: My owiginal died? *pouts* Dat sucks!
BECA: I know, I don't like it either. Wanna know something funny? When I read 'The Child' I thought you were gonna kill off prince Chid. How odd. Well, ja ne! ^__^ |
 Feye Morgan 2003-05-18 . chapter 5Aw. Sad. I had a sinking feeling that you were going to kill poor Dilly-san. But, hey, you gave warning. I thought that it was a very good ending. I'd like to see any alternate ending you have planned, though. Overall, excellent fic. I like how you titled Dilandau as the child. Very very very good! ^_^
*wanders off, grabbing a box of tissues for the ending* |
 Lady Devonna 2003-05-18 . chapter 5Wow. Read it all in one sitting, and liked it quite a bit. I kinda liked the ending, too. It sounds just like Dilly. |
| Lani-Anela 2003-05-18 . chapter 5 I can't believe its ended so soon, when i saw the title of the chapter was child I thought it meant it ws chid that he was gonna kill next. I enjoyed reading this, i think you done a good job.
Natalie x |
| Kat-Tastrophe 2003-05-18 . chapter 5 poor Dilly. i liked it. |
| ChOmBoLiE 2003-05-16 . chapter 4 Why didnt you kill Merle and Millerna?!?!?! they are the most annoying besdes allen... which i love the way you schopped off his hair *claps* |
| Crimson Shadows3 2003-05-12 . chapter 4 hilow! sweet ending. it kinda ended short but still gud. i like gory stuff, it gud!! that all fer now! |
| Blue Eyed Canadian Author 2003-05-12 . chapter 4 BECA: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Die you stupid baka king! Die you **! That's what you get for crossing Dilandau-sama! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Chibi Dilly: ^__^ Van is finally dead.
BECA: I hope she felt excrutiating pain. I would have loved to see it happen. *evil grin*
Chibi Dilly: Wait a minute, what is my original going to do now? Who else worth killing is left?
BECA: We'll just have to wait and see. Ja ne! ^__^ |
| The Otaku of Superness 2003-05-12 . chapter 4 Wai! I liked that but
A) Dilandau Would NOT kiss that **.
B) It was kinda gross that he licked her blood.
C) Van stared at her head! Talk about gross!
But I love this! It's kool! Yahoo! |
| Kat-Tastrophe 2003-05-12 . chapter 4 whos Dilly gonna kill next? |
| Feye Morgan 2003-05-11 . chapter 4 Hmm, now THAT will be an interesting murder case for the authorities. I'd like to see what they'd say about this...
No! Dilandau's injured! *stabs Van repeatedly* Well, I guess he did have grounds. Dilandau's not hurt very bad, is he?
Excellent chapter! This is a very good, if disturbing, fanfic. I like it! |
| Lani-Anela 2003-05-11 . chapter 4 OMG! I can't believe he actually killed Van and Hitomi! and what a way for Hitomi to go, be-headed! :S quite nasty! and poor Van he had to see it, but i suppose they'll be together now. I wonder who Dilandau's gonna go after next, is anyone gonna actually be able to stop him? I really like this story, it's really shocking! update it soon!
Natalie x |
| Crimson Shadows3 2003-05-10 . chapter 3 keep it up! plz plz plz PLZ rite the next chappy soon, plz! |
| Crimson Shadows3 2003-05-10 . chapter 2 that was unespected but i still liked it. time 2 read the next chappy! |
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