Loving this fic, Gemma, you've got *some* talent here! Keep it up!

Keep up the good work gemma i'm really enjoying this fic

Good story Gemma! :) I like the bit about "Mr Simba," it was a nice touch bringing a bit of humour to the story (Reminds me of the Notting Hill film). Anyway, I didn't watch LB when Carole/Martin were in it, but I didn't have too much trouble following the story. Is it finished or is there going to be more?

Another great chapter. It's Jack to the rescue :) What going to happen next? Can't wait for more
Athail
(whose waiting on the edge of her seat)

Yay a sequel. Great start, the return of Martin, this spells trouble. Can't wait for more. Glad to see this fandom isn't completely deserted.