dear god, that was beautiful... so sad, I didn't even have the heart to cry. (and thats a good thing.)

._. incredible. the emotion in this feels so honest and real ( as opposed to the typical melodramatic deathfics ) and so quietly grieved. i love your use of repetition, whether of phrases or pieces of imagery, and the characterisation seems to fit really well. ( only one thing that irks me: the constant use of emphasis in the first paragraph. ^^; )

but yes; heartbreaking and beautiful. hope to see more from you in the future. ^^;

A very sad fic (you *could* have warned there was going to be a dead Weiss-guy in this, even if the whole atmosphere of the story screams sadness and grief at the reader) but definitely an interesting, enjoyable read. That one letter was quite an impressive and original concept I thought.

Argh, I'm not sure the first review worked.

Lemme sum up: :)

Well-written and heartbreaking. I loved this. I'd also love to see some sort of prequel fic from Yohji's point of view, at his last moments.

Maybe a fic trade?

-Yochan
w.bishounenbondage.com

Good lord.

Well written and -heartbreaking.- Thank you for sharing. But waii.

I would adore to see a followup on this one from Yohji's point of view, maybe his last moments.

Maybe a fic-trade or something?

-Yochan
w.bishounenbondage.com

... oh god... i'm about to cry now...