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""We're having a baby, silly."

He fainted."
PART HAHAHA

this is a really good fanfic!! i really enjoyed it and how u put shout-outs at the end was really sweet. keep up the good work

such a sweet story. enjoyed reading it very much

I'm laughing my ** off right now! I'm only two chapters in and I love it already!

hmm..interesting...the king is syaoran then.?

Oh intersting. Syaoran likes Sakura, but the question is...does she like him? Love conquers all! hahaha

WOW! YoU StILL aMaZe Me! JeEz! YoU And YoUr CoNfOuNdEd PlOt TwIsTs ThaT MakE Me WaNt To ReAd MoRe! lol! GoOd JoB kId! KeEp Up The GrEaT WoRk!

WoW! ThIs Is A FaNtAbULoUsLy WrItTeN FiC! YoU dId An AbSoLuTeLy MaRvELoUs JoB! I EnVy YoUr WrItInG SkILLs! lol! KeEp Up ThE ExTrAoRdInArY WoRk!

lol Just had to throw in the punch to Lamar, huh? I would do that too. lol ^^ You're a really great writer, I hope you write more CCS fics soon!

KAWAII! man, now i feel bad for not having checked out your fics before now. *bows very low* gomen nasai!

This story was awesome, UC-chan!! Your writing is beautiful! My only suggestion is to work on your descriptions. Many times i had a hard time picturing things you described. for instance, the necklace that sakura wore to the dinner, you described it only as a silver necklace. silver in what way? a silver chain? a silver band? did it encircle her neck like a choker, or did it hang low in her cleavage? or somw\ehwere in between? i know these are little details, but it helps to set the stage a bit.

other than that, your story was very well done, UC! good work! i give it an A! ^.^

I really enjoyed this!! The Epilogue was my favourite chapter!! LMAO Lord Lamar as the NOISEMAKER and Sekai as the pinata??!!? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!
This was wonderful! LOVED IT =)

::*+*:: chibiNeko192 ::*+*::

That's interesting, cultures in this stories to create the spirits... 'Sekai' is the Japanese word for 'society' or 'universe' and is sometimes refered to as a type of mischievious little spirit, and 'Aditi' is the Hindu goddess of the sky, consciousness, the past, the future and fertility, essentially the mother of all in a sense... I might be reading too much into it, but I liked how it fell into place ;)

omgosh! what a cute story! i read it in two days! wow. it was just amazing. and so cute and fluffy. i kinda feel sorry for sekai, but the overall presentation of the story was just too much! i couldn't help but feel like this story was just so wonderful! wow! i'm completely enchanted!

luv ~ Bao Ngoc ~

lolz
aw so cute!!
if this were a book it would be a bestseller!!
=)

holy shitt you're an amazingly INTELLIGENT writer.
thats a real RARE quality in writers now a days.
showing intelligence with their use of a wide range of vocabulary. very impressive. it makes your story that much more enjoyable. especially the 'undoing' line..so shakespeare like!! =)