a bit jaded for my liking, but still a great poem. please write more soon, a bit more happy carby next time?

another great story from vivi! not that i was expecting a bad one, cause everything you post is just incredible. i really liked this one, because of the short/poem-like foremat, and the directness of Abby's voice. you've got that character down to an art. hmm the art of abby..

anyways, awesome job, and keep pumping out the fic! im addicted!

sorry i was to lazy 2 sign in... great job! you're one of my favorite writers! :)

wow, that was great. i love all your fics you should write more, you're a great writer.