 Blackened White 8/24/11 . chapter 5Not bad... Interesting storyline...
Not the best, but okay.
-White |
 ReneeAnotherHalliwell 7/8/03 . chapter 7 OMG GIRL! I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ... YOU NEED TO WRITE HELLA LOTS MORE! |
 gemstar2 7/7/03 . chapter 6id just like 2 say what a good fanfic this is,but could you please talk about the elements characteres more,the indivual characters?..i dunno that may b crap adivce..just my thoughts anyways...ohh and more about wyatt..hes seems a lil extra..ok so i want more everything..so im bascially saying write more casue im hooked!haha.. |
 Renee 7/6/03 . chapter 6 Hey! Thanx for the story. I enjoyed reading it and will DEFINATELY LOOK for more to come! ... GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB! ... talk soon ... |
 mystical354 5/16/03 . chapter 5Please write more chapters! |
 piper 5/8/03 . chapter 4 very good please write more soon i wonder what's going to happen next and if ashely is going to show her power? |