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I think it would be funny if you had the snakes bite Gelert Grindiwald


but i love you story so far!

this story was as good as AoT1! thank you again!

Since when did harry have elven blood? Though its obvious with Eustace/Minh relationshp, you should have put a mntion to it before hand.

AWESOME STORY. i CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE IN THIS SERIES.

I liked this part of the story. You were so detailed with the war that it was easy to see the two sides joining and Hitler and Grindlewald fighting together. Awesome. I can't wait to see how Molly reacts to Ron's 'tattoo'...

hmm, could Minh be the link to the elves harry has in his blood? This was very well thought out. This was so sad and touching. I'm glad harry finally told Eustace they're related. very good chapter!

Well that was convenient...Harry just suddenly finding out he has telepathy? Maybe it would have been better if you had dropped hints other than 'Tea having them nad her son being Harry's own ancestor. I'm not mad, i'm just saying, he knew he had elven powers, but didn't think to use them. That's understandable. Anywho, I'm so glad Ron and Hermione are okay. i just hope you don't have them 'mentally healed' right off the bat. Good chapter.

this so horrifying! Poor Hermione, working in the Crematorium?! I'm guessing she'll be writing a book about it to help her grieve...wow...

Wow, i've read a story where harry goes back to Grindelwald's time, but he was never place in a camp...this was scary. I feel so bad for Hermione and Ron but being placed in a work camp, makes me feel a little worried about Harry and Ginny's chances...very good chapter.

this was a very moving chapter...i was tearing up at the heartfelt ending. Bravo!

Hey, i just had to start this sequel tonight. I just thought i'd add this, you have a small error in this chapter. Dumbledore offers them a Lemon Drop but in the first book, he offers one to Minerva and says they are a new treat he's discovered. He doesn't know about them until 1981.

I enjoyed how this story was integrated into the past timeline but I was a little confused about the different ancestors (but that's probably just me).

Interesting name choices for Snape and Malfoy. Fitting too.
Enjoying the read.

I bet Dumbledore isn't the only one Voldy ever feared...Big Bad Harry is the REAL deal here lol!!

Be afraid Voldy...be VERY afraid!

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I can already see it...Voldy meets a dementor and sees Harry.