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Reviews For: Première Semaine

nattie700
2003-05-04
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was really sad and touching but at the same time you make it so powerful. How do you do that? Well anyway the first time I read through Dernière journée en mer I cried and the second time I only sniffled a bit. I can’t imagine what it’d be like to lose my brother (we’re really close). Anyway please add another story to this series. And I know in the first one Jack tells Vaughn that he should have made a baby with Sydney. I was thinking that maybe, just maybe she is pregnant but she doesn’t know it yet. Please. It would make me feel so much better and if you write it in I promise I won’t cry so much next time I read it. :)

P.S: How come you speak so many languages? I wish I could do that…not fair!
aaa
2003-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseAW~ So sad! You're so great at writing this though! I hope you continue it> pretty please?
purpleblue
2003-04-28
ch 1,
abuseu have 2 make this into a series
charmedgal005
2003-04-27
ch 1,
abuseomg! that was just as good as the first! and you need more! i'm serous! you do! this was just too good to leave here. you have to have emille meet sydney. it just has to happen. i was all sad when i reached the bottom. for two reasons. the first being that this was all over, and the second being that the two still havent met. got to happen.

keep it up! you are an amazing author!
Jen
2003-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. Thats all I have to say. I truly love the way you incorprated several characters instead of simply the typical, "Sydney sitting by herself thinking angst." The end, however doesn't provide much closure... I hope you plan to continue the story! Great job!
AME
2003-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWrite another sequel! Thank you for giving us this one! WRITE MORE REALLY SOON!
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