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| ferryboat George 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting |
| ImageEmpress 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYou have a knack for writing true. It's a remarkable talent; hope you exercise it regularly for us. |
| Perri Smith 2003-05-02 ch 1, | abuseYour touch for Inara's voice continues to be excellent. This is very nicely done -- the principle/practice format carries the story through very well, gradually building to life-or-death and carrying us with it. Very cool. |
| piper 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great! I never would have thought of this but I can definitely see Inara doing what she had to to protect her "family." Please write more! |
| koi 2003-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good! This was very much in line with Inara's character. Please write more! |