One Small Step! As a Chinese-Australian, I laughed out loud at that.

Lovely story.

That was interesting

You have a knack for writing true. It's a remarkable talent; hope you exercise it regularly for us.

Your touch for Inara's voice continues to be excellent. This is very nicely done -- the principle/practice format carries the story through very well, gradually building to life-or-death and carrying us with it. Very cool.

This is great! I never would have thought of this but I can definitely see Inara doing what she had to to protect her "family." Please write more!

Very good! This was very much in line with Inara's character. Please write more!