I like it, although the last chapters were a little short. Beggars can't be choosers.
I updated today, so ha ha.
STJA

No no I didn't mean it like that I was just in one of them moods. I don't think your racist either don't worry...*starts laughing* I always confuse people that way my bad. I'm so happy that I get a shout-out for reviewing I really wish you would get more though cause your story deserves credit. Hmm...Watch last second I bet a whole hell of a lot of people are going to review this! I wonder whos going to win...Jin or Bulma...

GO JIN! BE BRAVE WHITE BOY! Is he white? Oh well I'm sure you'll tell me if I'm totally getting this wrong. Lol, well anyways am I happy you updated the next day! You go girl! I hope you get some more reviews soon!

Amen to that but either way I wouldn't have minded! Loving it so far but wondering how the hell Vegeta is going to get his ** back to his home planet in 2 minutes...Dang he is going to have to work fast! Please update soon!

I have a feeling you aren't going to update this story until you get some more reviews and I don't blame you so I guess I decided to add some for you because I really would like to see more of this story but don't let me pressure you because I know sometimes when people tell you to hurry and update it gets you in a mood to go and pressure yourself into hurrying to please them. *coughs* I ramble a lot even here...Anyways just want to let you know that I'll be a viewer of the next chapter if you ever come out with it!

Holy ** thats right that definitely ain't Bulma...Wow don't I state the obvious? Hey someone flamed this story? What a stupid cracker...Ignore them they themselves probably can't write for **. Besides why bother thinking of them when you have such a great person like me reviewing your story! Ok good point nevermind, lol. Well anyways I think this is pretty good too just like your other story, so keep it up!

Plz Plz Plz tell me you can do the proper spacing on the computer. I mean, there is absolutely no way I could read all that easily! Now, instead of separating the text into like, 6, chapters, mold them all into one, and do the proper spacing. If you don't know how to do that, then after every paragraph hit enter twice and keep going. And use the correct grammatical and spelling rules.

Gee whiz! *slaps hand to forehead violently* I know someone else who is just as not-as-well-versed-in-proper-writing-rules as you! (and I'm being mild in my description mind you.) Good golly miz molly!

Bye, and good luck adhering to this advice,

Aleandra Alyra Sarienna

PS You've got a good story idea tho.

Ive never read a story like this before. its awesome. i hope yuo update again soon.

That's so sweet. Uh that could go for a number of things you wrote. It was mostly for the thing Vegeta said, you know Bulma jumping into his arms and all that stuff. That was cute.

Oh Thank you very much for the compliment on my story. I could say the same for yours. Its well written. And I want to know whats instore for Bulma in the future.

good luck.

awsome chapter.Update soon as you can

Hey! I totally lovedhow you made Bulma a fighter, I just hate stories where she's all weak. However in your sometimes i got lost, since the paragraphs aren't spaced...oh well...maybe itz just me...hehe...u've got to keep on writing! Your story is da bomb...hehe...cya*

Owiee! But I'm not going to say poor Cucumber...I mean Cubmer. He put himself into that postion. I really liked your story. Now is this going to be a Vegeta/Bulma fic. I hope so, it would be perfect. Anyway, I dont wanna bore you, so all i have to say is get the next chapter up and soon, this was awesome.

yay that was great. please update soon.