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| The REAL Alice Cullen 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuseI like it so far! I have like some kind of theme song it my head "Who ya call! the sohmas, sohmas!" It keeps repeating too...anyways, update soon 'k! The REAL Alice Cullen ^_~ |
| B.C Company 2005-08-20 ch 2, | abuseThe line 'I call upon the element_' is a bit too cheesey. Man, are you in like 1st grade or somethin'? This is NOT a bad thing, I'm just saying, it's a little akward... |
| Wing012 2005-06-28 ch 3, | abusePlease continue it. It's so funny. I wanna know what happens next! Don't do this to me! update soon please! |
| kishe 2005-04-15 ch 2, | abusewright more please and put back up #3 please |
| IloveFrey 2004-06-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love your story!! Its so good! I hope you can write lots more chapters!! Thanks for reading my review! |
| ashesofroses320 2004-01-23 ch 3, | abuseAH! UPDATE! Please please please please pleasepleasepleaseplease? This is such a good story and I can't wait to read more and you haven't updated since May and I'll shut up now. Love it update ja! |
| PegasusRider 2003-11-19 ch 3, | abuseI love this story its so funny!! Are you going to add on to it again? |
| Elvin Flame 2003-07-28 ch 3, | abuseI bet Aya fit in perfectly in France! ^_^ I love this story! It's very original! |
| Elvin Flame 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHee hee hee... |
| Kurisutaru1 2003-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAWW! Don't put this story on haitus or whatever...oo; I realy like it! I REALLY hope you write more! ::steals story:: your not getting it back until you write more! xD I'm just jokin' but, hopefully you don't take this story down. ~Kurisutaru |
| Branimira 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI love your story! My friend (Kurisutaru)Said it was really good!! And she was right! I can't wait to read more! I hope you write more! I wish someday I can be as talented at writing storys and fanfics,as you do. Your a big inspration!! Keep up the good work! P.S. I'm so addicted O.O' |
| delle 2003-06-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseit's not that scary at all, thank goodness... I found it's fun to read - humorous and crowded. Please continue more ^_^, the same goes for your other fanfics ;D |
| V-Amy 2003-05-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseCool! This is a really great story! my favorite altaverse! I love the ghost-busting and the powers and the way everything's set up, but I figure when you stick in thier profession them retaining their original curses is a little over the top, but this story rocks! Please keep going! |
| Kurisutaru1 2003-05-06 ch 3, | abuseWe! You gave them all powers! YAY! I want to know Gure-San's power. ^__^ Anyway, as always you got their personallities absolutly perfect! Ritsu is another one of my favorite characters. I'm glad you introduced him! Great job with the personallity! I really like this story alot! I think it's quite interesting. Great job so far, and update soon! ~Kurisutaru |
| Azn ChibiSweetpea 2003-05-05 ch 3, | abusecool story.. question: are you a kyoru fan or a yukiru fan?? I’ve been trying to figure that out but its impossible to tell from your stories.. which is great cuz it sometimes gets annoying when someone obviously favors one over the other and makes they one they like get all the glory while the other guy gets nothing ^_^ You are DEFINATLY one of my favorite authors, if not my favorite ^_^ you portray the characters so well! And the bit with Kagura is funny… Ayame is great too! The way he acts, etc, etc.. supernatural mediators.. LOL! |