amazing and poetic

Oh wow! Amazing! I love your writing style, so poetic and lyrical! Beautiful!

It's a good fic. It's very pretty, even though it's dark. I like how you managed to write an In the Forests of the Night fic without adding an OC there's really to many of them running around recently.

Damn! That is some good dark fic. Your story has to be one of the better Forrests of the Night dark fics I've read.

I really like the way you put this story in place. Its realistic and quite amazing.

I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you. Every part was so beautifully and thoughtfully crafted. As there were many artful sentences, i had a difficult time finding one that i liked over the others, however, for some mostly insane reason, i really liked: "He shudders again as the sun sets deep into the earth..." I suppose i appriciated how he wasn't shuddering at the sun, but rather, its passing. It seemed more like a sensation than an emotionally response, or a mix at the least. *shakes head* ANYWAY, i also loved the syntax of the last line "Gone are their reflections, faded into ashes and dust, tangled in spider webs of glass, broken." Great stuff, that, and very smoothly seems to depict the mood, while refering to aforementioned parts of the piece/chapter/bit/whatever. *laugh* ok, done now...er, i disclaim again that i cannot spell to save my life...

this is fantastic!
yeah. i was kinda wondering,
have you read the sequel?
i would very much appreciate it if you could write one based on amelia atwater rhodes' second "Demon in my view"!
great job anyway!

O.O! AWESOME JOB! AS ALWAYS!! *throws roses and claps furiosly*

O.O! AWESOME JOB! AS ALWAYS!! *throws roses and claps furiosly*

It was incredibly deep and I loved it. Aubrey, I love him so. Great insight. Happy Hunting.

It was incredibly deep and I loved it. Aubrey, I love him so. Great insight. Happy Hunting.

hey, i like ur new style of writing! it's so good! downright beautiful and (like u said) more lyrical...awesome...write/post more soon!

...(gawks at screen) wow!thatwas incredible!,or as my friend would say,that was deep!it kinda mirrors my mood right now! it was kinda confusing, but,WOW!i wish i could wright like that, but my stupid brain refuses to work*god damn writers block!i would greatly apreciate it if you could give me a few pointers on how to overcome this HORRIBLE problem, before i go nuts, and hey, mabey i could actually create something as good as this, well i gotst to and sulk,please e-mail me if you can to help a fellow writer
later
~anime_catdragon~

Sorry, I am too tired to point out anything. But this was very good. I love this new style of yours. The words just keep flowing, its beautiful. Heh my english teacher would love it.

Krikoris

"Insanity makes the rivers flow"