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Reviews For: Baron Agate

slayer-prime 2004-04-02 ch 30,	abuseThis is a great story. I'm very surprised that it has only gotten so few reviews. Please write more. If you need a pre-reader or just someone to kick ideas off of, please contact me at slayer_prime@yahoo.com.
fox eye 2004-03-02 ch 1,	abusethis is a good story. i must say its different but i like it. just one thing you might want to change the prolog it doesnt really tell much about the storie you know but other then that kepp up the good work
regie27 2004-02-24 ch 1,	abuseIt is really a pity your story hasn't gathered more interest that it truly deserves. Well, written, excellent vocabulary and fascinating story. Elements for an outstanding story. Guess the lenght of it frightened many around but do not be discouraged by the lack of reviews. I usually do not particulary like Senshi/Generals stories but yours is interesting enough to mk me forget about my particular pet peeve. Excellent work. Kudos!
eventidespirit 2004-02-13 ch 1,	abuseIt just makes me terribly sad to see fics like these. I mean my gosh you have like 50 some chapters (all of which are relatively lengthy) and you only have a few reviews. I haven't read it yet, but from what the positive reivews say of it, it seems to be a great fic. You definately deserve more attention for such a long story and maybe if you'd like more feedback, spice up the summary a bit. I guess readers feel alienated when they see a story that will seemingly be focused on an OC.
The Procrastinator 2003-11-08 ch 29,	abuseI think the reason why incredibly exceptional stories like this fail to get reviews is because the readers on ff.net are all teenagers looking for a Usagi/Mamoru romance/sex story. If you think about it, it's true. They couldn't understand a fic like this because it's so complicated and intricate and well, intelligent. Anyway, this is an excellent story. Superb. Like the previous reviewer said, it falls in the 1% pool of "Excellent Fics". Great job.
Adyen 2003-10-27 ch 29,	abuseI'm pretty sure it's the fact that you have to log in to review that prevents this from getting more reviews. I only read this because you actually have 25+ chapters and still going, but now I'm amazed at the details you've written. This is one of the better 'new character' stories that I've read yet. Chaos or Order. Each can promote growth, and each can promote destruction. Which is which?
Crystalmoon85 2003-08-03 ch 1,	abuseUm . . . Hey! I haven't started reading this yet, but I noticed it has been around for awhile and decided to look into it. I decided to read the two reviews you got and your readers seemed so impressed with it that I decided it was worth checking out. I don't mean to be negative when I haven't read the story yet, but your summary of the story isn't all that interesting. It really doesn't tell very much about the plot. Maybe if you added something to it - I don't know exactly what,but something - more people would be interested in reading your story? However, like I said the reviews make the story sound interesting - particularly the one by AlisonHarvey - and any story that has this much work put into deserves a chance. I have a lot of respect for authors who take the time to write a decent story. Anyways, I'll review again after I've actually read some of the story. PS: You really should thank Alison for giving such a great review for your story. Her review is what made me want to look into it more.
AlisonHarvey 2003-07-29 ch 11,	abuseI'm shocked that this story has only had one other review in three months! Given ff.net's equal opportunity publishing style, 99% of Sailor Moon stories tend to be cliched, poorly-written and recycled concepts. Needless to say, I feel that Baron Agate falls into the 1% of fanfiction gems. The introduction of an "invisible" character into the Season 1 timeline is ingenious and very well-done. Baron Agate's appearances are plausible and convincing, as is his yet-to-be-revealed full backstory. I've seen it done before but not nearly as well. I enjoy reading about his tentative relationship with Ami and his fierce protectiveness towards her, as well as his care to protect the timeline so that he can meet his future lover in the future. What I have enjoyed even more is the insight you offer into the relationships of the Four Kings in the Dark Kingdom and the personality you give their evil sides. Your acknowledgment of Jadeite/Rei and Zoicite/Ami while preserving Kunzite/Zoicite and introducing Tetis/Jadeite (My favorite new pair, based solely on your work) has been a delight to read. Since this is a review, I should probably mention the one plot item that seemed to disrupt an otherwise excellent story: Lady Amethyst. Acknowledging other writers' work is always interesting but in this case I feel that you could eliminate any reference to her and the story would still be smooth--your personal descriptions of the Black Moon Kingdom already have sufficient detail and craft. In the meantime, I look forward to hearing the explanation behind Agate's memory loss, the introduction of Nephrite's downfall--Jupiter, of course, if the pattern holds--and the resolution of the Agate/Ami/Zoicite triangle, which intrigues me to no end. A question that I hope will be answered by the end of the series: why hasn't Pluto interfered with Agate? Wouldn't he be a serious threat to the timeline if he was, say, to spill all the details of Galaxia? Best of luck, Alison
Dweller of the Depp 2003-06-18 ch 5,	abuseHehe, Think I have told you this before on ASRM, This story is cool! Keep uploading the revied version. ^_^ bows

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