parry 2004-06-21 . chapter 1Amazing. All I have to say is amazing. It's great, the perfect piece of work I've seen on this site. It's...short, sweet, and perfect. Everything a one-shot should be. I must say, I'm a fan of your FFX work.
-parry |
enlightenedkitty 2003-10-10 . chapter 1Great story ... good that you ended there and didn't draw it out. Too many stories do that and lose their potency. |
Kitsune 2003-06-06 . chapter 1 That was so sweet *sniff* good job ^^ |
H.M. Victoria 2003-04-30 . chapter 1Gorgeous. The characters were perfectly captured. I congradulate you. It seemed like it was part of squaresoft itself. |
shootinstar 2003-04-29 . chapter 1 brief, but beautiful. characters nicely captured. well done. |
The Angel of the Lion 2003-04-28 . chapter 1Loved it. You got the characters just right. |
Shido21 2003-04-28 . chapter 1Excellent story. Good job at portraying both Auron and Tidus. So many stories make Tidus too bubbly. You got him just right. Nice imagery at the beginning. Please continue writing. |
tuatha danaan 2003-04-28 . chapter 1Wow! Just...wow! I'm speechless, and that doesn't usually happen when I review here...
This is going into my favourites. The character interaction is perfect, so much so that I could picture the characters speak and move, their inflections and expressions without even trying. Perfect visualisation, thank you so much for writing this. |
Akishira 2003-04-28 . chapter 1 Read it and loved it! It addresses that section of the game perfectly. I always thought Jecht and Braska... well... weren't exactly the type to get it on, so your explanation was a refreshing change. I don't think I can do fics this well.
Write some more! (huggles) |
darkintrigue 2003-04-28 . chapter 1Bittersweet. Beautiful use of language. I love this. |