Something tells me that the ex-fiancées are in trouble. BIG trouble. They will definitely not like what's going to happen.
And I can't wait to see it. :D

I think somewhere in here you have Ranma stronger than the other senshi put together, and in general I'd say that was a bad thing since it skews the story so much. Also, while I have no idea about the copying issue you mention since I didn't read the original, I'd remove most references to it in your first chapter except for a short polite reference in the end author's notes to clarify how you have changed things because of the concerns of others or some such.

In the end there are inevitably similarities in stories, and that comes from there being only so many ways for basic scenes to go. Still, if you write a scene that you know is similar to another scene in another it can't hurt to credit the original somewhere.

While I've seen no sign of it in your story, what I find a more annoying in some ways than having similar scenes is the issue is when characters do alternate retellings of the basic Ranma storyline. You know the table, the hoard, Tofu, skating, pressure point, etc, etc. If you are making a major change in the setup then events should naturally fall out completely differently, if for no other reason a lot of your readers are going to know the original story and be bored by what is only a slight variation on it.

Getting back to reviewing this story, it does have one thing that does get a little old with Ranma/Sailor Moon crosses, and that is Ranma in the past is super powered royalty. I still think it is better for Ranma to just be Ranma without the past life. Sure he might have to learn a new skill, or even gain a little more power to run with the Senshi, but then that is nothing new for Ranma.

I like this story. I hope you update some time soon.

ohh man are you ever goin to finnish this?

Ugh... this is... ok. It seems really rushed with lots of plot holes. One of the main things I didn't like was how you had ranma just tell them about his past, just like that. Forget gradually developing relationships with time, actions, earning trust. Also the way Setsuna is acting, not like her at all except maybe the manipulative part. I think the changes you're making to Ranma could have been more gradual, mainly in his relations towards the girls. When has he ever volunteered information about himself? That's only happened when he is asked for specific information, even then embarassing tales, or ones that make him look scared wouldn't be included unless there was no choice.

But overall I do like Ranma's character I just think you really need to work on his interactions with the Senshi and have him at least need to put a little effort into developing friendships/relationships, but I guess it's too late for that since they pretty much know everything about him now...

Muhahhahahahahahahhahaha GO RANMA! KILL THE INSANE BIT... err kill the evil girls!.

UPDATE!

Very interesting. Looks like Ranma is starting to get a grip on his various psychosis. Hopefully the "lack of ranma" will cause the other girls of Nerima to get a grip as well.

i found this story i i got to tell you its good but i like its been to long that you didnt not up date it so get off your ** and write some more

For the love of god please continue this fic. It's ben soo long since i last checked on it and still wanting for for more.

please continue, update please!

I read Chaos and Carnage, and because mentioned this one, I went to your profile and opened it.
Like the first, I think it is very well done.
^:^ I am looking forward to seeing how you handle the idiot fathers and the mercenary girl, and of course Kasumi.

In other fic's I have read with Ranma and the Senshi, Ranma starts training them to give them a better capability to defend themselms without magic (Hey, everybody drops things, specially the stuff you need right NOW)

Are you going to uprade the armor of the Moon Princess and her senchi. Those short sailor suits are great for fanservice, but really, soon or latter, some monster is going to get through and damage the nice long legs and other sensive points.

Again, thanks for good and interesting story.

May the MUSU be with you.

Norris?

MORE! I want more, please update soon this is the best ranma SM crossover I thiink I've ever read and I've read alot. Please continue wirting this.

matrix how lame