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| haruka-chan 2003-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell...it's different from the other Taiki/Ami fics. But I'm not saying that I don't like it, in fact I love it! Not many writers get to explore that side of the series so you're sure to attract a lot of readers ... at least those who like this pairing anyway which I'm afraid is not that many. Sorry about that. But anyway, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^ P.S. sorry if this review sucks! *bows apologetically* |
| Lilian 2003-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay!! A new story by you!! Gods, I had forgotten what a great writer you can be... and this family was so very beautiful! Taiki was always the one fighting to remain aloof and uncaring, and now he's the one married and with two beautiful children on his lap. Makes you wonder about that 'never say never' thing... I can't wait for more of this wonderful story: Ami as a mother is a side not many writers explore and I think you're doing just fine. With the Three Lights getting a makeover and little Nozomi having just arrived, what perils and pleasures await Taiki and Co? ^^ One little thing though: try to separate the paragrpahs when there's a change of scenery. It got a little complicated there to read, but nothing some formatting wouldn't correct. Hugs and anxiously awaiting for more, Lily. |