Really good! I love it! Is it going to continue or is this the end?

well written. that was good.

Please update. This was awesome!

Congratulations, Chandra! :)

This was really a very nice start, pretty interesting and well-written. I guess this is one of the most original ideas I've seen about Snape and an OC. But I have no idea of how you'll explain all of it - as Helena, I do wonder why nobody had gone for her before! Oh, curiosity...

No time to read the other chapters now - I got so happy when I noticed there are more chapters already! -, but wait for another review soon.

BTW, thank you very much for reviewing "Keeping Promises" - it'll go somewhere (at least, I hope so!), but I'm not spoiling everything for you. :)

That was sad. Yet happy. Happy endings are always the best. I do believe that you are an awesome writer, for your story was very well written. I thought that it was very original as well. Keep writing!

The writing is amazing and very thurough. It does not leave out a thing. And as far as cliff hangers go this story is already starting with one. If this is the first chapter I am positive the rest will be very well written