Great, great story! Loved the way you told it. Funny, yet impossibly sad. Awesome job!

fantasic fic, i loved the ending. Actually, i loved all of it.

loving the crocodile!

Absolutely fantastic fic. Loved the ending. Loved the style; very, very original and very, very good.

-Viskii :)

hahaha... surprisingly funny yet serious at the same time... so what happened to harry? he died??

Er... Wow. You leave unanswered as many questions as you answer, not sure how I feel about that. Also not sure about the story rating - a bit heavy for the younger set, maybe. Nevertheless, I'm really impressed.

That was interesting.

Interesting tale. Funny and sad at once. Especially the ending, which was also startlingly but appropriately abrupt. I like the way there are allusions rather than full explanations and blunt descriptions. Excellent writing.

LOL! that was a really great start - I can fully imagine good old severus saying all that stuff - and can only guess whats being said at the other end of the line! lol - just think of the expression on his face!

Oh, please do at some point! I really want to know what happened to Sil! It's amazing how much of a plot you have managed to get across from one side of a telephone call.

~Padfoot~

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you MUST update this

this is so great

I was quite impressed by this one; an original idea, the way you presented it. I'd like to know though, about how long a period of time did you have in mind for each ... on a new line? It would make it clearer on how much the counsellor is speaking (or laughing). I certainly wouldn't mind seeing you develop this further, although it might be nice now to return to a more familiar format which allows us to hear more than one side of a conversation, say a conversation between Severus and Minerva. ;)

Funny, and VERY touching - please continue (I get the most pleasant surprises when I read the stories from the people who review me!)

Since I liked this so much, my first reaction would be a "Yes! Please! Write another one!" BUT... This piece seemed to end in such a way that it can be considered quite complete on its own. What has not directly been revealed, it is possible to guess at, and I agree that the hinting really preserves the quality of a phone conversation. It was a lot of fun to read through and see the puzzle pieces fit together into a sort of impressionist landscape of a picture of Severus' youth: it's not excessively detailed, as it would be in a straight-out story, but it is more satisfying than many (or most?) of that sort. You are guaranteed a lot of readers if you write another part (therefor, "worth it"), but this one alone was very satisfying. Don't know if I've helped at all, but I just had to say what I thought about this story!

This is awsome. Poor Snape! And Sil. What ever happened to Sil! A sequel sounds delightful, I hope you continue. :)